Loved this story and hope that inspiration and time to write come your way. Thank you for sharing!

Held promise.
Boromir is a git.
Borys

Hi there,

have you given up on this story? I think it would be a shame, because it's refreshingly different from most of the other Eomer/Lothiriel stories on this site.

I hope you continue anyway

Lia

finally another eomer loth story! and i think its brillant so far

great story i cant wait to see how it pans out!

Great first few chapters. I look forward to seeing more. :)

A great chapter cant wait for the next one.

Im loving this soo far; i really like the characterisations and the way you started off...not doing the wedding talk from the beginning but showing us what our favorite couple were like before becoming an actual 'couple', if you know what I mean. Though I dont care much really as long as its an Eomer/Lothiriel fanfic :D gotta love them...

HOPE HOPE you update really soon... please! *puppy eyes* :D

Well, it doesn't bother me for you to go with the movie hair color of Boromir and Faramir. But hey, I find movie Faramir hot so this is not exactly an objective opinion.

I like that you have Lothiriel as the type of person who doesn't think before they speak. Since Eomer is not always diplomatic, it makes their relationship ripe for banter. Your characterization of Lothiriel reminds me a bit (in a good way) of Maddy051280's The Healer and the Warrior. Obviously you should do your own thing but this story is highly recommended reading from me. Here's a link: s/2519886/1/The_Healer_and_the_Warrior

However, I don't understand how her facial description made Lothiriel a witty woman. And it seems simplistic to say that Denethor just doesn't like witty women. Maybe it would have been better if you said something like him not minding wit as long as it doesn't seem to threaten his sense of power. I find it interesting that movie Denethor also has curls but I guess they're not as wild as your Lothiriel's.

Overall, this is a good start. I also enjoyed your second chapter so keep up the good work.

I am enjoying this very much - it has a lovely element of reality in it. Well done. LBJ

I like your characterization of Lothiriel and how she finds it hard to always have to be grateful.

Great job! Is Eomer going to come in anytime soon, or is it just going to follow Thiri through the war? Are you going to show Boromir leave for the Council of Elrond?

A very, very nice chapter; Lothiriel is so lovely and flawed and sweet, it's something very nice to see. I like your characterizations of all your characters so far, and it's great to see that Denethor isn't being a complete jerk-so many stories have him as some sort of evil person, and he's so not intended to be like that. I like the small details you've included, as well as the conversation Lothiriel had with Boro/Faramir. You write dialouge very, very well, and you know the amount of words of substance vs. lightheartedness to put in, it's not purely "Haha" or purely Doom and Gloom.

A lovely chapter, looking forward to reading more.

A promising beginning. I like heroines to be less than perfect, so it's nice to see a Lothiriel who is no dazzling beauty taking every man by storm. Instead she's endearingly human.

Happy writing!

Lia

cute beginning; hope you continue