OMG this is Amazing

Sad beautiful and touching...
Loved it!

Sweet and sad. A part of me wished you would've gone all AU at the end and had them all living happily ever after. haha.

I just realized in re-reading this story that I didn't review it when I favorited it Whoops. So lemme say what I should have said the first time I read it.

Loved this story. I love how did kate's POV for the last couple eppys. Brilliant. I felt like it really could have been her inner dialogue at the time and even if it wasn't it was still intense and excellent.

Gr8 job. this will definately not b my last time reading this story.

OMG I love a good Jate story and that's what you've got here. I love when authors write that David was their son so that made me even happier. I hope there will be another Jate story in the not too distant future.

-SilverSpirit

Dear Lord you've turned me into a blubbering mess with this one.

Great POV on the finale! Loved how you incorporated the pregnancy into the events of the finale, how everything that happened still happened, but we got to experience a different POV. I was doing quite well emotionally - untill this part: He pulls her closer and for a second her not-still-showing belly touches his mortal wound, and it's somehow poetic how the baby, this new life, touches the point that is sucking the life out of his father. That's the most Jack and his baby will ever share.

*curls into corner and starts bawling*

nice. I really liked this POV, this new twist on the story. I love reading stories that get into the heads of the characters and what they were thinkin in a scene. Thanks for this fic!

It's an amazing view on the finale. There isn't many changed things as we saw the scenes, but it all seems different, when we know that Kate is pregnant. I like it very much and I can tell you, that I have tears in my eyes...

Ale! This fic is SO good. You wrote it amazingly - the ideas for each scene, I love the part where she's thinking about how Jack and Jin will be the same in never having met their children *sob* and I love the moment when the baby touches Jack - so heartbreaking. Was a pleasure to review it for you hun :) x

Ale...This is...WOW. I can't form words, because it's so friggin' GOOD. I can't begin to tell you how fantastic this fic is, how sad yet incredibly hopeful at the same time (I don't think anyone else agrees with me on the "hopeful" part, but it is!).

It warms my heart all the more to think that Kate took a piece of Jack with her and I love that you incorporated her pregnancy into their final moments on the Island, even if Jack never found out. And hey, OMG! David is the Jaby! I love that, because that's exactly what he is in my eyes, a metaphysical JABY. I LOVE THIS FIC SFM. Thank you so much for writing it (also, thanks to Steph for helping you with it!) 3

This was so nice. You are getting so much better at writing! I have read your other stories and this one is the best. Good job.

i still cannot decide if jack kate was a happy or tragic love story.