Love it but there is an error. For girls the hair color ends like silvertte, for guys it's silveret. Girls-tte, Guys-et/none. Girls brunette and blonde. Guys brunet and blond. Sorry, I'm a bit of a Grammar Nazi. I hope you take this in the best way!

That song Gilbert was singing at the beginning of chapter 4 killed me! x'D I need to sing that any chance I get hehe. Anyways, great job! This is really funny and entertaining, keep it up! :)

*trying extremely hard not to laugh* Pfffft, ahahahahaha! *epic snort* I feel like Ed from the Lion King. But thag waw some epic fucking shit there! I salute you!

It's 3 at night and my parents are sleeping less than 10 ft away from me... So I cannot laugh.
You are not making this easy.
(In short: this story is hilarious)

This Just made My Day! Honestly i was just sulking about how my siblings no longer live with me and this Completly brightened my day! PLEASE CONTINUE!

What the heck? What...
Also, I know at least Francis can see Gil. So what about everybody else?

.I LUV IT.

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OMFG, MUST FOLLOW! *luaghs at Matties misfourtune*

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this is gonna be hilariously epic isn;t it? *grabs popcorn*

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*giggle lOL's*

I am so sorry for matt, but at the same time I so want to do this to someone... Does that make me a bad person, or just awesome?

This is quite interesting so far. I do hope you continue it.

haha please continue' id like to know what happens. will something spark between the two? details DETAILS XD :D

Yep sure you had picked it "randomly" ;p sure you did Gil sure. believe whatever you think.

So um...update soon?