I love this story so so much. Please please please finish it?! I so badly want to know what happens next. Ahhhh. Please solve this cliff hanger problem. Your an amazing writer. I need to know what happens so please please write more to the story. Like what happens to the baby? And there relationship? What about Aro and the other gaurd members? Or what do the other Cullen's think now? Will she survive the birth as a hibrid? What about the woman aro wants her to train? How will they continue the relationship they have with a child? Will Edward learn to just love her as a lover or not? Will they have a pet and lover relationship? And what would it look like? Please continue writing this story I love it so much and really want to know what happens next.

Love this story, wish it was finished x

I still have hope that you'd eventually finish this story, I've been waiting patiently for the past 8 years

Thank you for this great story ! Read it all at once !

update

Holy Moly. That was intense and am I horrible to say I found it erotic? I'm only sorry to see that this story has not been updated for many years, so it's likely that it won't be, which is a shame. Still, I will enjoy what's here. Thanks for sharing!

Quel dommage de ne pas avoir eu une suite...

Man this story is really messing with my mind. Ive never read something so messed up before. Ive made it this far tho so I don’t wanna stop now. Am I the only one uncomfortable with the subject matter? Like I get there was a warning in the beginning but this is more horror filled then I expected, not to mention the fact that all the characters are SO NONCHALANT about it all. Idk, maybe its just because Im fairly young and my psyche is having a hard time wrapping my head around what I’m reading

I know its been a long time but hoping this story continues. It’s so good! If you get this note, I hope you are doing well. We miss you.

Allie

love your story!

What was the deal with the olives? If she wants a can of olives she should be a mother fucking adult and drive her ass to the fucking store and get some. What, she can get herself to school but not the store?
Clingy, whiny, crying bella is overrated and not all pregnant woman act like that. Some women have no fucking "symptoms" from pregnancy. But go ahead, it seems like you plan on giving Bella ALL of them. Typical.

And hiding a soda from Edward...really? What shes not an adult? Doesn't own any big girl underwear? Drink a fucking soda, just don't drink them all the time. Take some goddamn responsibility for yourself.

What the fuck was chapter 13? Just some stupid girly "revenge"...How in the FUCK was that revenge? All that stupid whore did was reward him for hurting her!

I cant stand it when writers do that ...the man does something wrong so the woman "gets back at him" by teasing him for two seconds then fucking him. Please explain to me how that actually makes someone learn a lesson? Its so fucking stupid!

So Edward met bella at the side of the beach...and ran with her into the woods...and just happened to have both rope and a paddle? YAAAAAAAAA OKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

And why is bella USELESS to Edward if she doesn't focus on getting spanked? That doesn't make much sense. Also Bella is a fucking moron. Why in the fuck would she allow some asshole to tell her her every move? Shes OBVIOUSLY independent to a point...I think shes only submissive during sex. I don't really understand Edwards need to hurt her...whats that about? And honestly I don't understand the whole dom vampire bit. Why does Edward act like a human dom? Hes a fucking predator for fucks sake...act like one. The ropes and the paddles and all that crap is so fucking unnecessary.

All the other vamp did was drink her blood...bella popped her own fucking shoulder.
But NOW shes broken? LOL What a stupid drama seeking bitch. This is the breaking point? How stupid.

Bellas fucking pathetic.