| Reviews for Perception Deception Part 2: Audrey |
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tigerlily124 chapter 30 . 12/21/2019 Got to say, I’m not an Amita fan anyway. Lol. Great story! |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/29/2015 Yaaaay! He's alive! Still on the edge of my seat! |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/29/2015 Last ch: no... No! Your not gonna kill the doc!...? This ch: no... Noooo... Not gonna... NO! YOU DID! T.T Lol on the edge of my seat as always! |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/28/2015 o.o... *turns page* ... o.o... |
Azolean chapter 30 . 11/2/2011 Where is part three? Ack, too long to wait! I just wanted to let you two know how much I appreciated these and would love to see more. So... *bows down and worships your awesomeness* More please... |
SundayStars chapter 30 . 11/1/2011 Incredible writing! I loved this. Will Part 3 be posted soon? |
MM chapter 30 . 9/18/2011 Well, I don't know where to start really. Read the whole story just now and it's just awesome. All the little details are fitting and I can imagine your characters really well you described them that realistically. I especially liked how you dealt with and worked out the different reactions of Charlie's family to the addiction. So, thank you for writing! and please, PLEASE, do write the third part. I want to "see" that bastard Tuttle brought down. (And I want David back, he can't just go an be lost to the team :.( ) |
Deanna chapter 30 . 11/27/2010 Super Fantastic Coons ! I love the way you concluded the Mark and Trina story, glad that it appears that Mark will have a "happily-ever-after". I am sooo proud of Robin for being there for our guys! Between Robin and Amita, am happy to know that Robin is the more mature of the two. Don and Charlie had better work hard on their recoveries because Tuttle is still out there. Perhaps Don could have some serious whumping this time? Alan will always be needed by his sons. Can't wait to read where this goes from here ! The absolute best part of this whole thing, was reading that you Coons won't quit writing NUMB3RS stories. ( YEA ! ) Please give us a guestiment as to when we can expect PD-3 ? Thanks a million ! |
PattyB chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 Even though you leave everyone in the story on a sad note, you two's reassurance that your creation of wonderful fanfics will continue, I'm a happy camper. Thank you Coons for this story and for the upcoming PD-3. Don't stay gone too long, please. Oh, mustn't forget to tell you how nice the Trina/Mark wrap-up was. I'm really a cockeyed optimist so I can't keep from hoping they may have ahead of them some sort of satisfying relationship. |
masondixon chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 I was very happy to see how Mark's part of the story ended. I really liked this character and I knew there was only so much you could do with him and for him because of his condition. So to see him end up having a rather happy and satisfying ending was very nice. Also glad that Alan got to get some of that block of guilt out of his system. Boy, these Eppes sure do spend alot of time drowning in guilt, don't they? They really do have to get over that (well, at least Don and Alan do. Charlie can keep some for awhile :) ) And fitting how Audrey ended up. Probably a punishment more just than death. And now we wait to see how Charlie handles the news about Amita. Really hope he doesn't chase after her. It is She who should be coming back to Him. I really enjoyed these regular updates and I am very glad to hear that neither of you intend to stop writing Numb3rs stories. I have always enjoyed your stories more than the show. I look forward to part three of your trilogy. Thank You. |
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 Wonderful ending. I loved Alan leaving an exhausted, recovering Don home and sneaking off to the hospital to see Charlie. I loved Robin being so helpful and considerate. I loved Trina and Mark! Hurray! I loved Colby risking a reprimand to confirm Amita's decision. I loved Charlie forgiving Alan. I loved the little tease at the end and the promise of PD 3. I don't suppose we will be lucky enough to have it really, really soon, huh? Oh, well, it's something to look forward to. Thanks for this exciting, top notch, well- executed, always entertaining look at Eppes and Co. Seriously hope to hear from you two ladies soon. |
luvnumb3rs chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 All he forgave Alan to fast, but I guess that is what families do. But things spoke in anger are often things that are teh most truthful or at things you have thought. I cant wait to have part three to carry us through the madness of christmas |
HuskerCat chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 A great final chapter. A not quite happy, happy ending. Good for Mark and Trina! Although part of me was hoping that Robin would again get the last laugh on Audrey, but I suppose the universe really did give her the appropriate "ending". :) And after the way she has behaved, I hope Amita gets some sort of comeuppance of her own. I know that she's been through a lot and she's not a saint, no one is, but still... I can't wait for Part 3. I know you've come up with some wonderful evilness with Tuttle and that we can't even imagine what your perfectly twisted (in the very best ways) minds have come up with! Great job on this series! |
Katy M VT chapter 30 . 11/26/2010 I loved this story. Here are my predictions to your questions: Will Amita give up on Charlie and become a Swiss Alps mountaineer? I dout it. Will Don and Robin continue to grow closer, or will circumstances wedge them apart? They'll grow closer and live happily ever after. What does J. Everett Tuttle plan for his final showdown with the Brothers Eppes? I don't know, but I can't wait to find out. Will David find his absolution in Washington, and will Colby ever get over losing his partner? I would assume Colby will be able to get on with his life. Will Serialgal and FraidyCat ever stop writing in the Numbers universe? I hope not. |
Lizzie B chapter 29 . 11/23/2010 Hmm, no-one seemed bothered by the fact they were reading a note left for Charlie. |