omg, this story is probably one of my favorite ones I read so far. To have the amazing detail and not just some silly plot, but a actually great lay out one. One where there happiness and sore, but action and romance. Just amazing work on getting the character down too. :) I honestly hope you are planning on create more for this story or even ending it here and making a sequel.

What I hoping to see, if you counties with this story:
1. What reason did Marco have for leaving her?
2. How would Yami effect the out come of Ace and Blackbeard fight, and if it doesn’t? What would she do and her reaction to it?
3. More crazy insane island. XD, won’t lie have say the love trail island just crack me up.
4. See how Yano and Ace relationship will progress more.

Thanks for reading my review and I hope your having a amazing year.
Starlight

On the previous review I forgot to ask for your DA account name!
I'd love to follow you there D

Hello!
So, I've been reading this for a long time really. I guess I already read it 5 times! Everytime I want to read something great about Ace, I come here again! I'm so much in love with this fic!
I love how you can write adventures, comedy, mystery and romance all together on a great narrative. It's awesome!
I can say this fanfic's updates are the most awaited on my fave list!
Keep up the good work, you are an excellent writer!
Yami is my favorite OC so far! Ace is my fav character on One Piece, and I'm loving how you are developing him!
One more time, congrats and thank you D

That was great and funny I'm glad your writing how long has it been two years I think since you wrote the last chapter but it was worth it I can't wait to see where this story goes abd looks like they are finally starting to fall for each cheler now

I was so excited to see an update! I had lost a little hope as a new reader, seeing how long it had been. I’ll definitely keep reviewing from now on! I love the awkwardness haha. I’m so glad he accepted her back and you are continuing this story. Until next time!

OH MY GODDDD YOU UPDATED! I checked my email today for something school-related and when I saw that you updated i almost couldnt believe it and checked right away! Im so happy you’re back oh my god I love this so much & I missed Yami as well! Looking forward to your next update! x

WELCOME BACK!
Oh god, how much I missed you, mein liebling 3

I have no idea where I was with this story or how it continued, so seeing now you're back I have to reread it from chapter one. You can't imagine how happy I am with this new chapter, or how I reacted when I received your alert in my mail. Also seeing the banter between Ace and Yami in this chapter again makes me anxious to reread everything.

"What the hell was that!" Yami exclaimed when, after a few metres of Ace half-dragging-half-leading her by the arm, she got her voice back.

"Oh, you know," Ace said and smirked, which, for no reason at all, made her all warm inside. "The birds and the bees and his penis and her vagina …"

And moan muffins xD How the hell did you come up with that?

Oh my goodness! I always trust that you'll be back to finish this story, so you've got my complete confidence as a reader and the wait is always, always worthwhile. You are incredible at drawing out the tension between these two and I couldn't be happier that they'll finally giving their relationship a real go!

i love that the prisoner position was reverse. Ace seriously need to learn Haki before going to Teach.

I love it

Please dont abandon this fic it sooooooo good i love it also one of the best ace x oc fics i have ever reading...hope u update soon

Omg I'm in love it's prob the best one I red

Please please please please please please please update soon

I love this story 3. PLEASE don't let ace die.

awesome its quite unique hope you update soon where is the story ending don't let ace die i always cry when i read fanfiction in which ace died