No, perfect ending. You're an excellent writer. It was perfect from start to finish. I reallly love short ones.

Oh, how this Dean h/c junkie enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing,

I like it. Short but sweet. Tough Sam, limp Dean. Awesome job with Dean's perspective. It was an awesome read!

I know this is an old story, but I just have to say that I absolutely loved it. I really loved that it was told from Dean's point of view, so we got see his disjointed stream of consciousness that captured his voice perfectly. Your imagery is impeccable, and I actually loved the 'pistil whipped' ending- awesome play on words. I'm definitely checking out your profile, and this story is headed right to my favorites! Soo good.

Good job

I really like this story. It's such a cool way of doing that POV. I really like the ending.

Nice job and thank you for sharing it.

I can't remember if I have reviewed this one or not, but it is one of my favorites. I enjoy the whole story and your characterizations.

Mic (the mom)

I don't know why, but I've read this story several times over the past couple of years, I just find it a cute H/C story, the characterizations are great in the context of the story, it feels so natural, like soemthing that could really happen and it seems like it could be a guy's reaction when they don't know what's happened. Loved Sam's take charge attitude to take care of Dean until the hosptial when he's just an embarrassed kid, and both feel natural.

Ouch, poor Dean with a hole in the neck. I love how it's halfway a mystery why Bobby and Sam was keeping Dean from standing up.

Wow, this is actually really good

It's great the way you just explained what was happening in the end, we was as lost as Dean and it was cool, keep us interested till the end.

And awww Poor Sammy! lol He's embarassed now ahaha

Kisses

Rosetta

Was good, enjoyed it. Like it that dean put up a fight

Wow... just wow! Gotta love hurt!Dean :)

I loved it! The more hurt Dean the better ;)

I have read this once before somewhere on LJ, can't remember if I reviewed, so I'm making sure I do so here. Excellent job! The silly, randomness of a mind in shock, the tunnel-vision that comes with a sudden fall, excellent descriptive language . . . I could go on. Wonderfully written fic. Thank you.

So lovely to see a new fic from you! And what a lovely fic it is - Dean in peril and Sam all worried. Perfect. :) And I loved the reveal of the glass shard in Dean's throat. Aside from the title, that is...

Anyway, thanks for a little h/c that didn't involve drinking demon blood, or saying Yes to anybody, or you know, general S5 angst.