Aw, this was wonderful. Thanks. I think many a people tend to forget the affects of Anakin's childhood so this was a breath of fresh air.

This story is truly bittersweet and beautiful. You never get this short of background from Anakin, it really opens the readers eyes to what Anakins personality was really like. Great job!

This was really wonderful! Totally thought it would be fluffy in a bad way but not at you!

That was such a bittersweet story...:')

Amazingingly touching, a sequel would benice.

Oh Anakin! This story was so sad, it made me want to cry :( But it was so beautiful too, and I love that Anakin can confide in Padme, even if he doesn't realize that she's awake and listening, at least he's talking so that Padme can hear if she chooses to listen. And thank god she chooses to listen :/ Poor Anakin, I just want to give him a hug! But still, EXCELLENT job :)

So sad. From the way you've written it I clearly understand Padme's delima, and Anakin's. Had Padme admitted to hearing those confessions it would not have helped. He'd have just stopped venting altogether.

Interesting. I always wondered about Anakin's attraction to Padme, about if it was another random Outlander he would be just as attracted.

I really like "It didn't last." and the way the whole first paragraph points to that.

I love the idea of Anakin having to translate his thoughts out of Huttese. I tried to work Huttese into my recent Anakin fic, but after he left Tatooine, he seemed to leave it behind in the movies.

Eew, "grinded bone". Very nice.

Good. I like the concept of this, of him almost at a confessional and of the reader not knowing whether or not Padme is awake.