| Reviews for Stumble |
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Guest chapter 10 . 8/4 Omg I hate the fact that I love the storylines of stories that haven’t been updated in years! This is such an interesting plot! Hopeful you come back and continue on the story! Please update soon and take care as well! |
QueenOfTheIronSwords chapter 2 . 7/15 I know you meant Sakura-chan but freaking Sakura-can got me good xD |
sunsoakedbones chapter 10 . 6/6 no wait, don'r leave it likw this! ahhhhhhhhhgggh |
xix.shadowlite chapter 10 . 5/16 Omg! This is the first time I’m ever reviewing but pls pls pls update this if you ever will (maybe you won’t even see this) but this is such a beautiful story and plot! |
iliella Castra chapter 5 . 3/6 don't worry author-san. I'm not one of those who complain about madara. I think his obssesion is potrayed him well. I kinda ship them hoho. age never matter to me, and moreover madara is immortal so he could wait until sakura become adult |
iliella Castra chapter 4 . 3/6 OMG! HAHAHAHA Kisame didn't want Sakura near Itachi is cute. he was afraid that sakura will have a crush on Itachi. if only he know Madara already fall head over heels for Sakura. lol. and he is immortal, and already claimed her. wow |
iliella Castra chapter 2 . 3/6 "Madara fell in love" Me911! |
iliella Castra chapter 1 . 3/6 I already in love with the first chapter, this is beautiful |
burrblefish chapter 10 . 11/26/2019 Easily my favorite story of Sakura being raised by Akatsuki. I like the logical route of everything, adore the way you've chosen to pose her character. Other stories tend to build her OP from the get-go, but I like how you've built a Sakura that sticks true to her canon counterpart. It's beautiful watching her grow in a different place and watching the members' interactions with her. Creepy, obsessive, sweet, selfish - whether it's Madara's possessiveness or Itachi's inherent need to protect Sasuke, even if its putting Sakura in danger, are all a great way to connect her to them. They're not all pretty and dandy and cute connections, but gritty, dark, raw, unique, true, of which will likely evolve (should you choose to update) as the story progresses. Thank you for your piece! |
Fealty chapter 10 . 10/7/2019 I knew coming into a story that hadn't been updated for almost five years could lead to heartbreak - but I still did it. And I enjoyed it. I enjoyed every chapter that has been posted *so* much. Thank you so much for helping me on a sick day, making me imagine a totally different universe I had *never* considered for Sakura before...at least, not in this way. I'm really grateful there was so much to absorb and enjoy. I don't know what reasons might have kept you from pursuing this story again, but I wanted you to know that someone right now, in 2019, found it and enjoyed it and loved it for what it is - in ten chapters, and that there hadn't been a single moment where I hadn't been enraptured or delighted. Thank you. |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/22/2019 It had to be abandoned ... just when she just got to Kakashi |
DevilWitchDaughter chapter 10 . 6/28/2019 Please update soon |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/11/2019 Well I certainly want to see what happens next but it’s been years so I can only blame myself for reading an abandoned story. Dang. Oh well. I’ll assume her Akatsuki family lost their minds. Lol. |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2019 Holy heck! Madaea is freaking me out! Ehhhhhhh! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2019 I love this idea! Chibi Sakura with Akatsuki... be still my heart! |