This is great! You pretty much nailed their characters and I can totally see their interactions in here happen if ever they're situated in such scene. They're such a cute couple! :3 The only complaint I have is that we're left to imagine what happens the next morning, lol. Anyways great stuff here and tnx for sharing! ~

For a person who havent played Crisis Core, you nail him very well. Tho, I suppose he's that kind of character that doesn't have too many layers.
Cheerful, friendly, empathetic, smarter than what seems to be behind his idiotic grin, womanizer, and as my friend said; adorable.
Well done!

I like Aqua most out of the trio, because Terra feels somewhat too melodramatic, and Ventus is too "Terra. Terra? Terra!" (whatever that means, eh? :P)
For once there is a character of "light" in KH that doesn't make me cringe with overly corny lines. Hoho!

This is so adorable! Zack is such a sweetie... I really do like him and Aqua together!

Aww, I loved it! Great job, and excellent writing!

I love it!

It's so sweet!

OHMYGOSH SO ADORABLE. I love Aqua sooo much! (Though that's totally irrelevant, isn't it? Oops.)

As soon as Zack asked her on a date I had a fangirl squee and thought, "Ohmygoodness, what if?" You did this just AWESOME. Aqua was in-character, something I always worry about. And, as far as I know, Zack was very in-character as well. I think you did this just perfect. Nothing rushed, nothing forced. I could see this happening, and so it's well done. :D

As for your writing, your descriptions were great and your dialogue very natural. The only thing I wasn't sure about was the location-what room did they end up in? Was it Zack's? Not too important, but I thought I would point it out.

Also, I liked Zack's, "Want me to go?" and then soon after his, "Want me to help?" It was just... awesome. Seemed like something he would say. And I like that he wasn't all, "OHEMGEE DO I LIKE HER FOR REALZ?" It was just that, "Way to crush on a girl" and that was so real that it made everything come together gently. It was great.

You successfully sated my AquaxZack fantasy! XD Much thanks and love 3

SO sorry for totally over-analyzing your fanfic XD You did a very good job, though. I'm impressed. :)

This is perfect. Adorable, with just the right amount of sap, courtesy of Zack's corny speeches. XD Oh, and throwing in the constellation of heroes thing? You *nailed* the blend between CC and Hercules.

That was so perfect. It was so cute! :3

& they were so in character. You wrote Zack perfectly :D

THIS IS SO FREAKIN' CUTE! -flails-

Aww, it was sweet! Too bad you didn't write about Aqua's reaction when she would wake up the next morning. And for someone who didn't play any games with Zack in it, I think you're pretty good at making him in-character.

awesome! eeeee so cute! 8D

a sequel to this would be really kool about aqua's reaction in the morning. i can c it now... (chuckles evily)

this story was awesome because... you know, it was just awesome.

enough of my rambling. keep writing!

*eyes sparkles*

This is definitely one of my favorites. I love Zack Fair and I love Aqua, thus I love those two together. It is still adorable when he asks her out and she gets flustered and embarrassed. This is a well written piece, and I hope you can do more in the future!

I know this review has nothing to do with your story, but I just had to send you SOMETHING! I just read your profile page and how you like Hollyleaf... I love warriors! I just found it sorta cool... Just saying... Hollyleaf is my favorite character too :) well... Thanks for reading this... Keep up the good work!

Birth By Sleep comes out today! The only reason why I woke up today! Zack...My favorite favorite character in all of Sqaure-Enix's games.

He's so Zack.

Anyways, before I get into all fan-girl mode- I must say I really liked it. Aqua does seem like the kind who would worry and would overwork herself for the sake of others.

And Zack?

He's just adorable.

teeheeee.. so cute~

I think you write Zack well for not knowing much about him. happy on the outside, thoughtful and aring on the inside. :)

i'm so excited for BbS, it's driving me nuts! i think this'll keep me sane until i get my hands on it XD

Keep the oneshots coming, Wolfe~!

-UnVeRsEd