This was a very nice story. Thanks for writing it!

Great story! Thanks. ;) You did a great job writing Morgause in particular. . . :D

Stumbled across this oldie somehow and l am so glad that I did. Wonderfully written, complexly plotted and spot on charactisation. Balanced, emotional and action packed. Brilliant.

I loved this so much honestly and I even get close to tears when Pulchra died

:)))))

Love it! Can't stop reading, but have to get to work :/

This was a really epic story, now going to your profile to find some more

Awww

I wish Pulchra is still alive and will go wherever Merlin goes

i find myself thinking of the vilia while reading this (ep. 4.2) but obviously you wrote this long before that ep came out... :P

Beautiful, thanks.

I love how Tristam just recites the training manual, including to explain nonsensically how Merlin always eludes Morgause.

I seriously appreciate the darkness warning. And if I didn't cheat, I would probably quit here!

I'd have been happier if this did not stay true to the show here, avoiding reveals at all costs. But then it would be my story, not yours.

I want Merlin to say "guess what Arthur, I'm the protector that destiny has assigned to you." And go totally BAMF on the bad guys.

This is really good, thanks.

Oh, I hope Owain isn't dead! I liked the reveal scene and I like Owain.

Very interesting. I'm looking forward to learning more about whoever is giggling.