| Reviews for Onwards |
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   David Fishwick chapter 32 . 7/15/2019 Brilliant and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/1/2013 The last name Nye shouldn't be used for a "baddie". Bill Nye would be very sad. Great story though, nice to see that Jack is Back. |
| Cat377 chapter 32 . 10/24/2012 Once again, great story! And I'm so glad you brought Captain Jack in as well :). Looking forward to the next part - it's nice not having to wait for updates. Haha |
| apprykott chapter 28 . 7/14/2012 Lol :)) The doctor's Illustration was hilarious. Oh. I don't know how you do it, but not even I could come up with something like that or keep the Doctor in character. I guess that's what makes the Doctor so special or the show itself because it brings random stuff into incredible stuff. I don't know how to explain but I love the story and may get tired of me saying but I'ma say it anyway just to annoy you (Lol just kidding ;) ) I hope to write like you if I ever decide to write again. -Asphodel |
| apprykott chapter 27 . 7/14/2012 Lol I sorta abandoned my fanfic. I'm uncertain if I'll write for a while. 8/ Love the chapter especially the ending. It never gets tiring to see a new person who boards the TARDIS and have a look of surprise that a blue box is actually a spaceship. :D Onward, -Asphodel |
| apprykott chapter 26 . 7/14/2012 I love you now... I thought I should let you know -Asphodel |
| apprykott chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Man I really wish this was on TV. I would have really enjoyed watching it as an episode. Lovely writing as always. 8D -Asphodel |
| Saved4EverAndEver chapter 16 . 9/13/2011 YES! Thank you for bringing Jenny back!1 |
| Saved4EverAndEver chapter 12 . 9/13/2011 I love that you're naming the next kid Jenny! I was so sad when Jenny came back to life without the Doctor knowing it! :( but great story! LOVE THIS! |
| Saved4EverAndEver chapter 2 . 9/13/2011 I love how you used the line "Do I just have a face that no one listens to?" ! :D I LOVE that line :) |
| Astradi chapter 32 . 9/5/2011 ... Must.. find ...part ..three |
| Sky- XD chapter 23 . 7/30/2011 i like the chiffhangers |
| TheGirlWithTheOnyxRose chapter 12 . 7/25/2011 But Jenny's alive! that would get confusing! |
| timano chapter 32 . 7/14/2011 An exciting, engaging, and superbly fascinating story! I rate it a 25! (Yes, out of 10 possible stars. It shows how much I loved reading it!) I look forward to the sequel, which I'll get to in time, as I'm reading the completed Doctor Who stories from earliest to most recent; so sometime after you finish the sequel, I'll get to it and review. But given how well-written this one was, I have no doubt I'll enjoy it! |
| MidnightMoon2 chapter 32 . 7/4/2011 WHAT? You ended it like that? Thank goodness I'm reading this after you've already written it or else I would spontaneously combust. |
