Damn Abalisk, that got /dark/; was not expecting that to happen owo

I mean, it's great, but also I'm sobbing into my pillow right now. Lol the first time I became aware of this fic was from your Tumblr and a photo I mistook for one of Leith's twins

Seriously though, /tears/

You should update... you had a good thing going. But I doubt if you still care about this particular story of yours lol.

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER
I low key hate you so much right now

Jay's not gonna die, right?

You know, it's really cruel to leave such a good story on a cliff hanger for so long! XP

The freaking pain. My heart. Please update.

hummm, did Kelvin only just realise he was killing a child? well, too little too late.

Ooooohh update please! I like the idea of this ;)

Please update!

Fuckin cliffhangers.

love it hope you update soon!

ooh, this is amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Really unique plot here. :D

I'm so glad you started updating again! I mean, I'm ready to choke you for the cliffhanger but still. When I read this a while back, I was so hooked I got disappointed that this might never get continued. Then, when I came back to the site a week ago, and was looking for Greed fics, I found this again because the title and summary were familiar. I love you still, especially now that your muse has returned, so please, keep updating I'm too much a fan of FTSOS. Jay is awesome, and snarky just like his dad. Two questions.
Are you gonna kill Jay or Clark?
Do you ever plan on mentioning or bringing Ling in?

I hope you update soon this is amazing!

omg hhhhhh ! i hope it's not too long until next chapter because i am dying over here (not the way jay is though). keep up the good work!