Thật là 1 cảnh tượng lãng mạn vô cùng.Bối cảnh quen thuộc của đất nước chúng ta nhưng mình nghĩ bên Nhật có lẽ cũng không khác mấy.Mình rất thích cách bạn xây dựng nội tâm nhân vật ở đây, buồn 1 chút, vẩn vơ 1 chút,nhưng trên hết Yayoi vẫn mong mỏi 1 ngày Jun sẽ thú nhận với cô rằng anh yêu cô.Họ xứng đáng được bên nhau như vậy.

So sweet and lovely is this one too. You picture Yayoi and Jun in very IC and sweet manner. I'm glad I can read such delicious stories about them. Thank you so much for writing, my friend! _

*hug* Luly

Hi AzuKnight,I really love this story,especially when he came to meet her and they shared the firework in the night.

I hope you would be kind and write more for this couple.I hope to read more fics from your good writing in the you very much.

Very cute 're skillful enough to merge such an important yearly event with Jun/Yayoi ,and nice grammar as well as like it.

I couldn't say anything ... I'm speechless...!

But, I must say that your fic is so nice! The story idea seems simple but sweet considering that your story genre is friendship and romance of a teenager.

In this story, Jun willing to leave his job for a while in order to see his 'best friend', Yayoi. Well, as we know, Jun is a guy who is very serious about his future that he must studying all the time. But, in the end he came to the party and met this girl. This is the sweetest point in this story. So sweet ... XD

As usual, your writing ability is can't be doubt. You make the story flows in a relaxed and simple but also very dense and detail. The dialogues were also impressed relaxed so that the readers can read the story with a smile in their faces. Aaah, I wish I could write as good as .

OK, nice fic!

Keep on writing. See ya _

Luv this fic! You're a genius for putting scenario that is very light and sweet at the same time. I love it, I love JunxYayoi, they're the BEST!

I just wanna say that I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOUR FIC! SO WELL-WRITTEN AND GOOD IN DETAILS! I LOVE THIS COUPLE MUCH SO PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE FOR THEM.

Well, How can I say about this fic? *giggles*

It was awesomely written! The Yayoi's feeling about Jun's absence is very well explorated here.

He is studying so hard to be accept to Medical School and thinks about his future, not only as a player soccer, but as a doctor too. He didn't go to the party, but he didn't forget someone that he loves inly. Someone that helped him on the hardest moments, didn't leave him even though he was sick and, together, overcame their dificulties.

Another strong point was you have mentioned the Musashi players, it's rare to find them on any fanfic. Congratulations for this too!

Finally, I love Jun and this CT couple (I also love Matsuyama X Fujisawa, but it's not the case xD). Keep writting about them!

See ya!