Love this story! it was very unpredictable. The only fault I found was that it made me cry, and that is not a fault with the writing, but one that lies in me. I just like happy endings. Keep writing you are gifted.

Its very difficult to follow this story, If someone is accused of rape, their allegations are made clear. Uhura would need to be present when Kirk was accusing Spock of rape. Especially in any federation, they would have needed to hear both sides before they made Spock transfer. After chapter 6 I kind of lost interest in the story, I felt there were too many flaws with the actually federation rules and regulations.

However, you write really well... I just wish the story did not make a complete 180 in the middle.

And I imagine choking kirk. Wow, this story really made me hurt him.
This was really well written. Excellent.

Hello,

I read the whole story and I have to say I was very excited about this story. I know you complained of holes but I felt the plot was sounds and the conflict was strong enough to carry the reader through to the end. I've read your over works and I felt the ending not to be your strongest but good none the less. If ever there were an author that could write about a deeply conflicted S/U relationship it is you. Keep it up, I'm a big fan that finally found a voice to speak encouragement to you. Love your work.

Oh this was just incredible! Seriously with an ending that made me wince, the adjective poignant does not do this work justice.

God this story kills me each time. I just feel so sad for them.

Wow u actually have tears running down my face after this one. Its so sad! But also written beautifully so thank u for that.

;_;

Loved the story, well written, I just hate the lack of logical progression with the characters who oddly enough deal in logic.

So tragic..I hate tragedies..

BUT...I loved this story!

Wished Kirk got his sswhoopin' but kinda feel that he did get what banlanced their losses..memories of what could have been for everyone.

Overall I give it 8.7 stars out of 10.

I would have liked to see more of what happened to Spock after his dismissal..since he was one of the main characters that got the boot.

Spock was ready to give Kirk the ss whooping he deserved. I could FEEL thet tension in this chapter!

But the sshole still looked at Spock and Nyota in the window being intimate.

The guy truly deserves an sswhoopin'!

My favorite line..

SPOCK: "If I may be completely honest with you, I find myself at odds. I am torn between breaking your neck here and throwing you out the window."

lOVED IT!

great story. I was hoping for a happier ending but the ending you gave us was the right one.

I apologize beforehand for this review. But the last five paragraph got to me! I just want to say:

RUN! MUTHAF*CKA!

WHOHOO!

And the author writes gently: Kirk thought he was headed toward him. He panicked. He wasn't ready to talk to him. He didn't think he ever would be.

H*ll No! Kirk was sh*ttin' bricks! Can I get an amen?

OMG can I have some tissue? This was a sad ending - well written.

I wish Kirk would die. He really deserves it.

I like how Nyota died. I think that was the one surprise in this story, and I appreciated her sense of peace at the end.