Interesting chapter and plot and amazing idea

when people try to tell people how their fanfiction should be but dont have the guts to have anything more than guest so they cant get replies... lmfao

Everything was fine for the first few paragraphs until the Kyubi spoke. I highly doubt he would be advising Naruto about feelings, when he just got locked back inside the seal. And he has never once addressed Naruto or anyone else as Kit in the entire series. You need to stop reading fanfiction and re-read the series, if you want to write good fanfiction.

Bro please release the left over chapter's , stoping here is unbearable

I fell in love with this story. Naruhina goodness from beginning to end just how I like it. Totally loved it.

Wonderful chapter...some great moments for Naruto and Hinata. Naruto's status in the village has sure changed...even Hiashi is a supporter. If only Kishi had put just a little of this into the manga...it would not have the gaping hole in the story that is still in the manga plot...having to do with Naruto and Hinata.

Great beginning to the story...nice setup of the characters and excellent writing. I read some of the reviews that say this story is unfinished...I guess when I reach that point I will treat it like a 'choose you own ending' story. Thanks for the good first chapter.

It's a real shame that this story has been abandoned. It reads well, and focuses on personal favorite characters of mine. It has a whole bunch of twists and follows the cannon story well enough with out getting the feeling of "been here done that" but it also doesn't veer off the original story by so much that its completely something different. The character's development is also very nice. And their all true to character, (except for maybe Hinata, but who knows how she really is once she's out of her shell) I wish you would remember you left this hanging and come back and finish it. Because It's actually really good. It's made me laugh, and to be honest, I feel its closer, (at least towards the beginning) to how events would have actually played out after Naruto defeated Pain. (You can't just declare your love for someone and act like nothing happened. Especially when they go ape shit on the guy that supposedly killed you.)

because of this chapter i love your story and by the powers invested in me by the grand generals of the naruhina army i give you the Banshīkirā Medal in honor of your service.

Banshīkirā- banshee killer

comeon men write more

sakura dies? AWESOME!

It's a real shame that you appear to have abandoned this fic. It's pretty near to the canon but it's quite enjoyable, and the Naruhina moments are pretty cute.

Whoa, this is a very awesome story... i haven't read a good story like this in a long time... Hell, its a great story!

I really hope you update soon so I can thoroughly enjoy this story...

Still, I understand that real life comes first so I'll wait patiently for the next update...

Good luck with whatever!

Waiting for the next chapter. You better not kill off anymore of the Konoha 11.. :/

I cannot believe you killed Sakura off.. wth! First Killer Bee and now Sakura? Come on, freaking A. You better give Sasuke and "Madara" a miserable death.