Hey, this is probably the wrong place to do this, but I wanted to say hi and I figured you could delete this later on...lol
Although I really wish you could update this story, I've missed it :) Read this last chapter over and it made me smile. Hope to hear from you!
M

PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST FANFICTION! KAYLEY AND JIM ARE PERFECT FOR EACHOTHER!
ITS THE BAD BOY AND THE GOOD
GIRL!
AWESOMENESS!

This is Amazing!

This whole story was phenomenal. At first I didn't know how you were going to get Jim and Kayley together without it being...random or too soon or to ditsy, but you did it so perfectly! And the rain scene? Off the charts incredible! I was almost in tears and I literally started jumping and clapping for them, squealing like a little girl! I also loved how it ended. It was sweet, no one died (which I was so scared of ever since Zach told Monique to kill Jim), and it wasn't super cheesy either. It was heartfelt and realistic, truly amazing. You wrote such a beautiful story! Thank you so much for uploading, it must have taken you forever to write such a fantastic story!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

I BEG OF YOU!

Ok I think u already determand who this is by the name I don't know why but I never really got to read these and I couldn't sleep so I desided to read them I don't care what you have to say but all I do havetosay is you are a amazing. Author don't ever stop writing and Jim's mom is a bit like my mom and I do wish you good luck and you need to find a publisher

Oh. My. Gosh. O.O A shoutout to me? And not only that, to Second Chances as well? EEEE! *super hug* Oh my gosh, I can't thank you enough!
Also: Thank you for continuing this, thankyouthankyouthankyou! I can so picture Monique carrying around those books, lol. Once again, you've kept everyone in perfect character and behaving- or in Zach's case, misbehaving- absolutely wonderfully. The description of Jim and Zach's antics on the ramp was easy to follow and easy to visualize. And the tidbit about Tony Hawk was interesting. It added great detail to the scene! :D
"At least I got to open my eyes to the most beautiful angel in the world." That has got to be the sweetest line I've ever read I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for more, especially on the stranger from the bookstore.
And ohmigosh, Zach called him a greaser? I LOVE you! *awesome big super hug*

I just read your whole story. It's very cute. I'm not big into the whole god thing you have Kayley doing, but I can over look that. I like Jim, but I can't help but think that he must of at least had people to chat with. I have been the girl with no one, and it so lonely, he probably would have killed himself. Again, speaking from someone who knows. What would be more likely is that he had a few people (maybe not at school but among other skatebroaders) he would chat with. Maybe not enough to call them friends, though.

P.S. Please forgive any grammar mistakes. I just got out of work an hour ago and finished up your story. And it's 1 am here.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Seriously :D I shall wait with patience for the next chapter Well, some patience :P

I can't wait to see how Kayley reacts when she gets her present! And I wonder what she's getting for Jim...?

heey, would you write more chapters? please go on! I love this story! its brilliant!

:)

*hugs* You're so welcome!

continue pleeeeaaassseeeeee! I BEG OF YOU! THIS IS SO GOOD AND AMAZING!

i know this review should be posted on Chapter 21, but the computer I'm on is having personal problems, lol.

i loved this chapter so much! You have Delbert down perfectly, he was so much fun to read!

'"This is so…grotesque. And full of misguided morals."

Jim patted the man on the back. "Exactly."' That made me smile, because i can so picture that.I can also picture Delbert's money fiasco quit well XD awesome, you are brilliant.

And the book you described?

'a burgundy, leather-bound, gold-leaf work by the author Jane Austen.' I would pay good money to own such a beautiful copy of Pride and Prejudice. Kayley is going to LOVE it! (at least, I think she will...unless she already has it lol)

and the video I watched on your youtube page was amazing. Flynn and Rapunzel's breath-taking lantern sceen and a song from one of my favorite bands, you did an awesome job D

Also, glad you're back! missed you and your litterary talent! (If you would like to, can you look at my deviantart page? .com i understand if you don't...but if you do, tell me what you think!

-Sam