This was indeed, pretty gosh darn sad... It made me really sad. sad.

This is an amazing story, I love how you've written this, it's different from the other fanfics I've read about Prowl and Jazz. I hope you update again soon, this is a great story, I can't wait for more!

Is this going to be continued? I love these stories so much! Jazz...Lord Jazz. as a nice ring to it,

Well done indeed, Ricochet... *facepalm*

Well, I'm glad things went comparatively smooth, regardless of thet litte incident. I really don't like those other nobles, though - arrogant afts who wouldn't know a good mech if he fell on their helms. I bet they'll have a hard time getting used to Orion. *grins*

Man Jazz must have been scared silly and nervous as hell.

C.D.

Wow, that was a close one with brother Ric there, Jazz! I'm glad that Prowl is NOT a mech to let a little idle chit chat get in his gears because any lesser mech would have been on his way back home at just the mention of what was suggested to have been going on at home! What family members and their crazy antics! The icing was the Lord Orion 'adopted' him, mods and all, and will be taking him back to town...poor Prowl needs lots of hugs and snuggles now...super fast )

I'm sorry they are so poor right now in Praxis, but I am glad they have survived what has befallen their civilization. They have time on their side to rebuild. I love the mental images I get of Prowl being detailed and painted up for his special meetings in town. He would have to be truly radiant, esp to Jazz - He's eye candy to me, I promise Jazz I'll only look )

And I think Jazz has come such a long way and really does a great job all things considered - crazy brother showing up considered - I wonder what kind of mods he had installed - dare I ask? Is is running around with boobies or something? And yet somehow Orion is able to sit and chat w him totally unaffected...in impressed. And Prowl didn't crash, nice for a change too )

Favorite bit is the running game of trying to keep Jazz talking all proper for the special parties. I think he did a great job and should be richly rewarded. Prowl got the easy job this go round, IMO. Thanks again for a fun update )

like it a lot, and its set in the G1 universe right

Oh man, there's nothing like family to screw up the best laid of plans. _ Poor Ric...someone should really see about getting him to stop playing with that Idiot Ball lying around. :P

This chapter was so much love! Everyone's coming into their own (well, Jazz and Bluestreak anyway), and maybe even groundwork for some important friendships/noble alliances have been made? (Lord Orion, indeed!)

I less-than-three this series so much!

I've been remiss in not reviewing before. (Procrastinate much?) When I saw the story update, I did give a bounce of joy... Now I'm going to go read it, as a reward to myself for saying SOMETHING about your hard work... I really really like Jazz/Prowl

EEEEEEEEEEEE! I was pleasantly surprised to see another chapie of this! You always manage to portray cultural behaviors and hierarchy so well. This was an awesome chapter. I was really tense thinking that Richochet's appearance was going to ruin everything and then Orion appeared. This was great. Really awesome!

Well done. I love how much trouble Ricochet caused for poor Jazz. Nice to see everything work out in the end.

Poor Jazz, having to deal with a reckless sibling. He has my sympathies.

Wonderful update. D

Well written piece.

Very awesome story!