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DJmiso chapter 14 . 10/1/2018 kinda screamed when kanda appeared. no! when froi appeared because i just knew kanda was with him. was in his “earlier” years! screamed louder when he DID show up! ahhhhhhh, fave character fer the whole series. i wanna hug him! i know he’ll just stab me, but it’s ok! QQ |
Jayla Fire Gal chapter 1 . 7/19/2017 I know chances are slim (considering it is discontinued), but I will still hope. |
Jayla Fire Gal chapter 22 . 7/19/2017 This is the most thorough, WONDERFUL crossover I have ever read. I honestly hope you have plans to continue it, or rewrite it if you don't like it somehow. (But I honestly love it how it is) Keeping my hopes high, ~Jayla Fire Gal |
HeroSeekerFrost chapter 10 . 6/29/2016 Tyyyyyyyykkkkkkkkiiiii! Tyki! TykiTykitykitykitykitykityki! If you can't tell I like Tyki... he and Scar should become best buddies! Even if that wouldn't ever actually happen (fingers still crossed). Neat crossover so far :D (x1000000000 rating for Tyki) |
Le Kawaii Potato chapter 22 . 4/30/2016 MORE! This is really good please make more content. I think maybe a chapter or two from now i think you should have Ed appear in the Black Order after he gets knocked unconscious (we might put mustang there too) they have to spend about 3 yrs until Allen uses the Ark to get them home. |
CrazyYaoiYandere chapter 22 . 9/26/2015 Is there going to be more of this?! Seriously! There has to be more somewhere! And if it's discontinued, at least say in the summary that it's discontinued or on hiatus so that no more unfortunate souls stumble across this awesomeness and find out that it is not and will never be completed! *sigh* I know you can't reply to this. But if you see it can you make another page on this story to explain the situation? :) |
Itharax chapter 22 . 9/25/2015 REALLY INTERESTING! Update soon! |
Guest chapter 22 . 8/8/2015 I do hope you continue this! I know it's been a while, but this is the best fanfic I've ever read. I hope you are well despite the long wait and I wish you the best. Sincerely, An admirer. |
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 22 . 1/20/2015 AHHHHH! He killed them! (though it was to be expected) AHHHH AND-AND-SO CLOOOSE- so close to Ed and Al meeting again-! Ooohh, I wonder if Al will meet Ed while he's running away, or if Ed will miss him if he goes to the Black Order, and then they search, and and and Nyaahh... T.T I want to know what happensss. :P Neat story! I'm hooked by this crossover. :) |
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 21 . 1/20/2015 Those twisted bastards! Ahaha, and I bet it's going to be armstrong... only "extra muscle" i can think of. xD poor ed. :P |
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 19 . 1/20/2015 Oohh that BASTAHRD-! Tuckrrrrrrr... Earrrrlllll... xD DAMn! I hope Ed and Al find each other soon. AHHH |
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 15 . 1/20/2015 Aiyaa! I hope Ed finds Al or vice versa at some point soon... It'd be awesome if Ed got innocence too somehow. I wonder what's going to happen? :P |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/11/2014 When Ed didn't get auto mail, my mind suddenly blared the AoT theme |
Junipearlee chapter 22 . 6/14/2014 wow awesome chapter s is edward a noah? if so thats really cool :D anyways great chapter loved it keep up the good work :D |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2014 Aww, little Allen got overworked...again. Cross is such a bastard, but I still can't hate him. And the Elrics are orphans now :( I Hope they won't agree to the Earl's trade... |