The way this story is written shows how smart its author is,
So congratulations on writing something so original, creative, vivid and neat.
Well done!
Also I wish it was in chapter after chapter format but that snapshot and the diary entery format was also cool.

you have such a beautiful way of putting words together

That was amazing. The concept and deliver were majestic.

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OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! YOU DID IT AGAIN! YOU MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY! I have to say your stories, plots and writing styles are very, and I mean VERY pleasing to me. You have such a way with words I simply cannot miss each one. I tend to skip a few words when I know its unnecessary and boring, but yours really is the cherry on top. Hope I'm not abusing you with flattery though ;) Absolutely loved it! Really I do! Thank you so, so much for it. I couldn't be more grateful.

Though I'm afraid I just HAVE to ask this particular question.

Are you British? Because I can't help but feel that your words and sentences are more fitting of a British accent instead of the more obvious American ones (which aren't horrible, really, just that I don't particularly favor). I'm sorry if I seem rude or I offended you in any way, but I really am curious.

jusr simply perfection. no more words needed.

Love it... totally love it. Thank you, thank you, thank you for making the Fanon world wonderful!

Wow. This was so deep and well written
I wish there had been a bit more romance though :)

Nevertheless the idea is really cool

Absolutely positively wonderful.

Really really good story!love what you did with the snapshots and stuff

Well written. Great story. Thank you

Goodness, do I love this story. And all the John Green references! I mean, the 'facets' quote, of course, but also the Buddhist concept of a 'question wrongly put' that John likes to quote so often. Really, this story is just beautiful in its entirety and explains the occurrence of Rose and Scorpius about as well as I've seen it put. I can't decide my favourite version of your Rose/Scorpius, but it's fairly safe to say that this ranks up there with them. It's also pretty safe to say that my entire list of Rose/Scorpius favourites is made up of your stories.

That was truly incredible and skillfully written. I loved the romantics and the plot formation. Good show, good show. ;)

i didn't really know where to leave this review so i settled for one of the stories i finished reading today. what i'd like to say is this: you're an amazing writer. there are many other ways to express this in a more detailed manner but i don't exactly have a way with words (unlike you apparently). i read fanfiction when i've got nothing better to do so i never have any real expectations from any story i start, other than to find it mildly entertaining. except i ended up reading every single one of your scorose stories and i loved every single one of them. they're the same characters but both they and the story are different each time, and yet just similar enough to make me keep reading because it's within the parameters of what i imagine their characters might be like. i can tell you put a lot of thought into your writing and you pay attention to details, which feels really rewarding for readers since it's not content you owe anyone to produce. either way, thank you

Great story, well written with a good plot