There is so much potential for this story. Are you going to write any more to it?

More please. And next time please use line breaks in between point of view changes. It would make reading it a little easier. :D Thanks.

This is interesting! I wish you would update again!

THIS IS SOOOOO AMAZING! Dont stop updating i absolutely LOVE this story!

I'm loving this, I hope you continue soon.

Love this story! I wonder what Will hallen when they discover Pan. Are they going to Lyra's world, somewhere in later chapters? That would be awesome! The Gobblers and Voldemort working together! I think this Should be their Daemons:

Harry: a Female deer named Cervamor
Hermoine: A Male otter named Lutor
Ron: Female dog names Lupana
Voldemort: female Gigantic python named Serpenta
Dumbledore: A Male Phoenix (because He's gay. No serieusly. J.K confirmed this) named Fury.
Cho: A Male fox named Fong.
Neville: A Female badger named Nela
Malfroy: a Female monitor Lizard named Zeroza
Hagrid: A Female Dragon named Draconias.

Ooh a memory of Lord Asriel and Mrs Coulter :) I like it!

Even in Fanfictions Umbridge makes me cringe, anyway good chapter :)

Ooh Harry is jealous! I can't wait to read more :)

Oh, Dumbledore knows too much! :P Still a good chapter, and I like how Lyra insulted Harry, it was like comparing two heroes :)

Hahaha Umbridge the new Mrs Coulter XD Lyra still is stupid sometimes :P

Haha fainting fancies :3 I like how you've mentioned Will in Lyra's dreams, i'm still sad that they couldn't be together :'( Anyway, onward!

Lyra a Gryffindor, I thought so :P She may be cunning, but not a Slytherin :D

Lyra meeting Fred and George...I smell mischief ;) I will keep reading! :D

Snatching stuff, good old Lyra is back :) Can't wait to read more :)