I'm waiting the next chapter. I still am.

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OH . Please continue . I'm dying to read this . Oh pleasee , pretty please . And the boy next door please . Beg u !

good, i like it.

ok this chapter was..how do I put it...AWEMAZING,GREAT Just fantastic! I loved it just like the rst of your stories :) please UPDATE I can't wait!j man I love this as much as I love sasuino and that's a LOT! Update soon

Aw, I got mentioned. :)

Good going. Update. :)

PS: break down those big chunks of paragraphs. I know I am being whiney but it really is hard to read stories with big chunks of paragraph.

Update soon ! :D

I can't wait any longer !

I like it !

Keep it up :D

I read it and I do like the idea. Because to me, Ino is the most beautiful. However, some of your wordings could be much clearer. Make it to the point and precise. Make it simple. And the commas, you still need need to work on them. I couldn't say much about the action scene because as you know, I'm not too knowledgeable to critique it. And if you're still wondering about the "line thingy," message me and I can tell you about it.

Anyway, good start.

please update make them get 2gether please I love ur stories and sasuino so muchhhh please update for party time I've been waiting

awesome please UPDATE