Love this story

Absolutely loved this, such a unique idea! Thanks so much for sharing :)

Wow! Tu historia es genial no hay otra forma de describirlo

First of all, I'd like to point out that the concept of this story is so very fascinating and creative! Of course, time travelling is a well known concept to use in narratives, but I find it especially refreshing on this platform because I have never seen it here before.
Unfortunately, the realisation of this idea did not go as well as I thought it might. This story is an exposition monster, so to speak. It was very tedious to read through the beginning and actually well up until the point where Universe One Alice comes into play. The first few universes Edward visits, don't really have any kind of effect or relevant consequence for the continuing plot, other than to establish the idea of travelling through parallel universes. This was kind of a waste of time and, as I said, very tedious. Unfortunately, that covers most of the story, and that's why I skipped numerous chapters.
Nevertheless, it was kind of worth reading on. For when Alice arrives to help Edward, the plot gets a different flow and suddenly, Edward finds himself in a very well fabricated conflict (namely saving Alice versus finally finding Bella). That was brilliant!
And although not all of them are in character, the personalities of the characters were quite decently described. Edward is characterised best in my opinion because you really catch his self-loathing personality.
Nevertheless, there isn't much space for characterisation because of said exposition monster.
The subplot with Jasper trying to find his own redemption by searching for another Alice who's alive is very nice and reliefs the story a bit from its Edward-heaviness. ;D
And of course, the epilogue is a wonderful conclusion to all of this!
So all in all, I want to thank you for posting this story, and although it's not perfect, it certainly is worth reading.

- lol from Germany

Just found this in the communities! A real gem, thank you

This was a well-written Edward bashing story disguised as an ExB love story. The entire story highlighted and expanded on every possibly conceivable idiotic choice that cannon Edward did and COULD have made and took it to the realm of aggravatingly stupid. You should have put a warning in the summary of how much you clearly hated his character. You could have kept all this angst. It was over the top. I wonder why you wrote a story using a previously developed character that you hate as the supposed protagonist, but paint him in 98% of story as the antagonist. This story wasn't about ExB. It wasn't about love, family, or friendship. It was about how much you hate the character Edward Cullen and you really could have kept this sh#t.

It looks like a long time since you wrote this,but it's amazing. I was utter enthralled. Thank you

Thank you, this was so good! I love it when I find such a good vamp story after years of reading FanFiction.

Such an unique story! This was a real page turner! Loved it!

Great story! I read this in one day because I couldn't put it down.

I could tell you were a fan of Sliders. Have no other readers watched that show? I thought it was pretty obvious where the initial story idea came from. Still, I loved Edward sliding between Twilight universes.

I was annoyed by last Bella's short hair. Twilight vampires don't change, so their hair wouldn't grow. Yet their bodies are indestructible and impenetrable - why would you think their hair and nails would be any different? It was just luck that Jasper's gorgeous hair was never ripped out, LOL!

Anyway, I loved this story. And I'm shocked -SHOCKED- that it didn't have more reviews and favorites! It was so good!

I guess alice being there is helpful but I find her so fucking annoying...what will you wear?who gives a flying fuck and now the headaches god shes a fuckng pain in the ass

please tell me that this is not the bella for him! shes a wild fucking animal and she'll always feel guilty about all thepeople she killed and edwad wasn't arounf for Nessie and blah blah there has to be a better bella for him in another world...he should just kill bella and leave her crazy ass in that cave...Jacob will take care of nessie

please tell me that we didn't read 26 chapters of the same shit over and over just to have Edward take bella away from another Edward?

its kinda stupid that their always in the same place...forks like the only thing their dcisions change is who their with not where they live...in the one where edwerd was with rose at least his personality was different he was a ball less pussy

You say that everyone is happy in this world but I don't think Edward is really happy...he seems like he has absolutely no fucking balls! rose has him wrapped around her fragile feelings...her fantasy about them running erands for her? shallow cunt! I fucking hate rose always have always will. and what with this their mates shit...I thought you didn't really pick your mate that it was destiny or something but here he is with someone else...and he says shes his mate? yaaaa I think not