This is honestly one of my favorite labyrinth fics ever! I hadn’t read it in so long, yet here I am returning to such a fun sweet fic!

Aw I enjoyed it. It was a sweet little story. I do enjoy when Jareth lives as a mortal for a bit :)

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

I liked it.

Murdor. DeKrypt. You win fanfiction forever for that one.

There's no "c" in Ambrosius. And I LOVE "Why Should I Worry"

It's "...choosing the path...".

It's "I'll place the sky within your eyes.".

It's "Are you the sweet invention of a lover's dream?". And how old is Sarah?

Beautiful story! I loved it!

This has to be the most beautiful, most vividly detailed, and complex ending to a Labyrinth fanfic I have ever read. I really enjoyed reading this story, and I am so happy with the ending! Thank you so much for writing this great story. I can't wait to read more stories of yours.

I woild have the goblin king mark her with a silver star or tatoo of an owl on her shoulder or forhead

Very well done! I truly enjoyed your story, it was original and well written. I would love to read what this new life with her king has in store! A sequel?

Beautiful! I LOVED it! :D

Amazing story. Wonderful closure! I loved it !:)