OMG! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! *is sorry that I just now realized that you had posted TWO chapters*

and, ahem... *clears throat* KUROFAI KUROFAI KUROFAI! Pwease? Like, totally pwease? *big eyes*

Option two! Option two! I want my SyaoSyao! Wai! You posted it today! Happiness! Now whens the next chapter?

Ahem. Syaoron will you please explain to dear Mavis about Syaoran's personality.

Syaoron: Not much to say...although he is weaker than THAT bastard...but he's anything BUT happier. On the contrary, he's very serious and the only time he smiles these days is when he's around me.

He is not very fond of Cloney just so you know!

Syaoron: Chapter was...interesting...

You just don't support SyaoSyao!

Syaoron: Of course I don't!

Syaoran: Why? Why am I so distracted in the chapter? ! ?

Syaoron: It's okay Syaoran! It's okay! It's Mavis's story!

I liked the chapter~!

I did not fail! I cannot fail! You just cannot accept that I got 100%!

XD hahahahahahahahaha its soo funny! XD

wait. when you say "Fai was Fai" does that mean:

a) he was being his brother

b) he was actually his brother *gasp*

c) he was being himself

d) the actual Fai was acting like Yuui

Alice test much?

Hahahahaah YEAH! KuroFai *dances like an idiot* Dont worry Fai, you're not gay!

Aislynn is also Tsubaki right?

It is sufficient! Yays~ I was a character. *hugs Kuro-Microsoft even tighter* XD

Kuro-Word: ! Get off!

Can't wait for the next chapter! X3

hahaha Kurogane, you cuss because you're happy?

Kurogane: LIES!

Fai: *gasps* so... so~ all those times you said you wanted to Fu- * censored* and then kill me, you meant you loved me!

Kurogane: EH? NO!

Fai: *as if you didnt hear him* He's lying. Yup. hehe

Kurogane: -_-

Oh yeah, and,

Fai: CANDLE!

Alice: _

ANYWAYS, NICE CHAPTER!

That...was IT? Really? REALLY? I was expecting something so much longer! Oh well. Life goes on.

Oh, this chapter gave me a request idea. You should totally do an annoying videogame thing, where everyone gets this tiny pet of something and it follows them around telling them what they have to do to progress through the chapter. Ex: "Fai, you must climb that tree and jump into a boiling lake to make it to a different part of the story." Oh, and make 'em really annoying. It'll be hilarious!

Oh, my Dog! The Bob part was the funniest! I also love your kuro nicknames. Heh heh, kuro-cellular phone. .

WAH! That was hilarious and so was chapter 1! Eh! Can I be in your fanfic? I wanna be the random character who always clings to kuro-myu. Plese consider it. I'm a girl, just in case. You don't have to since it's your story, but PLEASE consider.

I love it how Fai is like 'yay school!' and the 'other thing' Alice didnt even coment on that... XD

Bu... Butterfly ~

Ps, when they go to school, you should introduce Alice's obsession with candles and how she goes all loopy! She IS worse than Mavis if she smells a bad smelling candle!

i repeat. she IS! IS! IS! more screwed up in every way imaginable in the way her brain processes things!

You should read my chapter of Tsubasa: Wait, what?

It tells all about it! And seriously, she goes all screwed up... poor Kurogane... poor poor Kurogane...

Well~ *valley-girl voice whilst saying that* At least Fai from your story doesnt know that Alice is totally controlable when shown a candle... O_O *covers mouth* no! Damn it! why did i just go out and say that? ! ? ! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH

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AAAAANYWAYS, nice chapter! hahahahaha sorry for really long review... it seems like it should be longer... GAO!

*getting word from Fai*

Oh yeah... im not allowed to say that... /

Hrmm... who wants to text Alice?

Alice: Like, OMFG! We hav schul 2mara, an im like, duuude, i dun wanna go, but Mr. Fai all like, WTF man, u gotta go... and stuff... its like, totally uncool, man.

Mr. Fai is like, totally like takin away ma fone duuude! Im like: WTF maaaan! DUUUUUUUDE!

AND he dont even care dude... totally uncooll... .

Kurogane: I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU NOT TO TALK OR TEXT LIKE THAT EVER AGAIN!

Alice: *texting* ah dude man Mr. Grumpy's like, totally layin down the law... dude... take a chill pill. Like, totally. Shia.

Kurogane: STOP! NOW!

Alice: *freaking out* NIIIH! DUDE! TOTALLY UNCOOL! MAN! DUDE! WTF! OMFG! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! HES GUNNA KILL ME- oh candle...

good chapter by the way.

The end greatly confuzled me.

But yay! You updated!

I'm sorry about your disclaimer chapter.

Alice: I cracked up when anti and no argued!

Fai: Hyuu~ So did I!

Alice: Since when did u read her story?

Fai: Well, we are in it aren't we?

Alice: True.

Fai: Ah, the whimsical adventures of Mavis.

Alice: OoOoOH!

Fai: YOU HAVE JUST BEEN FAIAFAIED!

Alice: ...

Fai: Fai-a-faied. Its like being awesomicated, but with afaied at the end of it, and instead of 'awesom'its Fai!

Alice: o.O

Fai: Yes.

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