Reviews for Not pretty but pretentious
Usma chapter 11 . 12/25/2018
Could you write about Remus or Sirius finding the memories after severus dies? Seriously so sad.
Cilou chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
That was a great story, I really like the relationship between remus and Sirius and how you develop this friendship wich turn into more in your prequel. About this story, it was fun, really well written, sometimes quite disturbing... I really like the part when Sirius came back and begin to feel guilty about having slept with a sixteen year old boy, because that was kind of creepy... I like that you didn't just brushed it off...
Well I was really like Brrrrrrr when I read about Harry and Draco because I really don't appreciate this couple and I couldn't see what that could give to this story more than the canon couple...but that my problem haha( and I am no a fan of story where everybody is gay )
I was a little bit disappointed by the end, because I always thought that it is to simple if the magic can resolve our emotional problem and the mess we made in our lives by passion or love. I also thought that the beautiful relationship you describe in your prequel deserve a more honest end...
I understand that there was not an easy way, and Slithering Severus is kind of cool ;) but I would love for Sirius to understand that the Severus he loved and the older one were two different persons ( if he could be with him) and that he had a real honest conversation with Remus.

Thanks for this story, It was full of great and fresh ideas and well written! Well done ;)
Guest chapter 11 . 7/28/2015
This is just perfect, sad, but perferct.
KittyKat chapter 11 . 6/20/2012
... IT WAS LIKE YOU FED ME THE MOST VELVETY, RICH CHOCOLATE IN THE WORLD, THEN TOLD ME THERE WAS MINT IN THE MIDDLE! You made me cry! 3 I loved it! It was extremely touching. But really really sad :'( I didn't expect that... Good job though :)
wandamarie chapter 11 . 5/7/2012
great work
wandamarie chapter 10 . 5/7/2012
good one
wandamarie chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
great work thanks
wandamarie chapter 8 . 5/7/2012
great work
wandamarie chapter 7 . 5/7/2012
thanks good chapter
wandamarie chapter 6 . 5/7/2012
thanks
wandamarie chapter 5 . 5/7/2012
thanks it is a good one keep up the great work
wandamarie chapter 4 . 5/7/2012
thanks keep up the great work
wandamarie chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
wow it is a good one
wandamarie chapter 2 . 5/7/2012
thanks it was a good
wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
thanks it was a good one keep up the great work
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