That's okay. That's fine.

So, this next chapter certainly cleared some things up about the three in the earlier chapter. The Demanding, the Distant, and the Joyous. I also have some more suggestions for you too; brace yourself.

I felt like Doumeki was very out of character, with his five minute monologue about what happened before Watanuki passed out. I also feel like Yuuko wouldn't knowingly put her employee in a situation that might lead to his death, fond of him as she is. The dialog needs some work, so that it becomes a dialog and not just a bunch of information presented by the characters. And lastly, about that arched eyebrow that keeps popping up every few paragraphs :) Yeah, I think that eyebrow, along with the "leer" needs a few chapters of break time. Sorry if I'm making you mad by picking apart your writing. It's what I do, and pretty much the only reason I review stuff. I'm not trying to depress you or anything. Keep up the good work Kumerai!

Sounds interesting enough as far as plot goes, but some spelling mistakes and awkward sentence structuring detract from the story. Like "faint" is not spelled "feint." The character introduction for the three ghosts also felt a little rushed, what with the reader being thrown a bunch of descriptions and hair colors, but hopefully their personalities will be filled out as the story keeps going. One last note. Sometimes your use of flowery language makes your prose sound cliched, although I do have to say some of the rhyming chants you used were pretty good. I know, I being awful harsh, but its given with the intent to help, dear. I wouldn't give the advice if I thought the story was a lost cause. As I said, the plot sounds pretty good so far.

*applaud*