Gosh, you have no idea how much I loved reading this. The way you don’t scrimp on the grimy details of the Shinra underbelly is admirable. I admit though that the amount of angst seen in the last few chapters could drown a city. Just, wow, everyone’s a mess. Overall, the exemplary way you write demonstrates your control over the entire process.

I’ve decided to make a compilation of FFN fanfics that aren’t on AO3 to share with others, and I’d like to include this one. If you’d rather I not share this please tell me. If you’d like more information and or the link when I finally publish the list please inform me. Otherwise, thank you for making such a wonderful contribution to the FFVII fandom! I hope that sharing this with others will gain you more readers!

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it's a great story

Nooooo I've reached the end of chapter 21 and I'm so sad ! Ugh I hope this gets completed because it's so good ! The plot is good, I like you developed the characters. And I'm dying to know will sephy find cloud ever?

Cloud is such a sad little bitch, hard to go on, glad this story died.

well wish you were still writing this fic because it is really enthralling

Um, I know I'm just one of probably a lotta people who want you to update and write another chapter... but that's okay cuz that means that I can encourage and demand and plead and I won't be the only one! So, that's exactly what I'm doing! This is... geez! All but indescribable and just so entrancing and I won't be able to stop thinking about what I've just read and what's gonna happen and if Sephiroth will catch Cloud or if Cloud will come to his senses and go to Sephiroth and if that piece of Zack in Cloud will find ever find peace and... I don't know! All that and more. Please, for the love of a good story, please write more! I NEED to read more! I don't even feel guilty about pushing you, and normally I would, but I adore this fic so much and I just desperately wanna read and find out what the heck's gonna hapen next! And, I want to see Cloud and Sephiroth happy together! So, I'm asking you to take another crack at writing and to, please!, finish this fic! Cuz something this good needs to be read by you devoted fans!

Your ability to churn the emotions of the reader, to make us feel the in testy of this fic...are astounding. I absolutely love it. I do hope your muse will bite you again with this, but even if it does not, you are a wonderful and captivating writer. I could not put this down, from start to finish.

You need to put a rape tag in this. You only said MENTIONS of rape... not the actual act.

Wow... you really just did that huh. How the hell did Hojo get one over Cloud?

I... never knew it was possible to create an awkward Sephiroth but you somehow managed to. Don't get me wrong, it's not a terrible thing 'cause this is actually pretty hilarious.

This is such a good story! The plot is amazing and the characters are perfect!
I hope one day you'll find the time to continue it! w

Hi, new reader her. I really enjoyed your story!

I think you do a good job of describing all the characters insecurities and complexes. Nothing is straight forward. Most of it is twisted by their warped perception of themselves, hopelessly tangled with the truth of the situation and the clumsy utterances of others fumbling understanding. It is neither right nor wrong. neither pretty nor ugly. It is what humanity make of life. Really great job on this front.

I found Vincent's and Tsung's 'relationship very interesting. It's the first time I come across such a rendition and I found it quite fascinating.

I also find it quite cool that you don't pull of the blind acceptance that so often happens in time travel fanfics. It's particularly well illustrated in Kunsle's denial of Zack in Cloud. Needless to say The Zack in Cloud was wonderfully pulled off. His flawed bravado filed by an indomitable yet fragile spirit. His wish to make right what has not yet happened. His reckless desire coupled with his awareness of his selfish wish.

I find Clouds introduction to Sephiroth very interesting and the development of Sephiroths feelings. The wonder and imaginings Sephiroth had around the mysterious writer that then latched on to the little hints he saw. I would have liked a bit more beating around the bush before Cloud revealed his face. Partly to feel that fantasy, but also because it was an incredibly rushed development of emotion creating a very delicate relationship. It had the potential to go so wrong at every turn with Clouds incredible vulnerability and unfamiliarity with the new Sephiroth. And it would have given Sephiroth more to build his affectionate feelings on. The first kiss was rather rushed. But then again Sephiroth might well have not been able to stomach the mystery for much longer anyway.

There was so much more that I like about the fick. But I think I will leave it at that. Thank you for sharing this with us on the internet! I really enjoyed it.

Good story. Hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen to Cloud and what Shinra's response to Angeal and Genesis now that they are cured of their degradation.

Ohhh, the developments in the latest chapters leave me wanting more~ I can't wait to see how things are gonna work out with everyone, though I feel that you seem to have a thing for complicated relationships.
Hope you update soon~

I will faithfully wait til you begin writing again. Your craft for words are just pure talent and it'll be a shame to not finish something that will make you grow as a writer. Also, for us fans to sadly not see these characters grow and experience these emotions with you, dear writer. I bid you adieu until the next time. I have hope that you won't let us [fans] down. Good luck. :)