It’s great, just needs a second chapter, maybe a third, some to tie the two together. She needs to find out Danny’s secret and have her struggle hive the fact she tortured him.

I really liked this. I wonder how Valerie would have reacted if she had found out Danny was Phantom.

I love it!

How did Danny revealed his secret tho?

please tell me there is a sequal! D8

Great story. The ending line just worked so well. Danny's ultimatum also brought chills down my spine, it was perfect.

More... Please...

-_- 0_0 :( Grr...everything that describes my feelings right now...like wow. I really liked this, but damn. That ending was just completely, "WTF" worthy. I still like it though!

Val, if only you knew...

This is really good. It needs a sequel. Can I write a sequel? Please?

Absolutely amazing, this is hands down one of my favourite fics.
I've read this twice now and both times it left me questioning how to go on. It's just that fantastic.
That ending though! That was definitely a punch that left me with a mixture of emotions. Getting over the initial shock of the ending, you left the story at a point where we can imagine what happens next. While I really want an ending to this, I'm actually glad you left it there. We're free to imagine what happens next. We can choose our own ending, whether that be a good one or a bad one.
Over all I loved this fic, maybe even more than the first time I read it. It's written very well with only one or two little errors. Writing this in Valeries' point of view was a great touch, you did fantastic. I never once felt the characters were out of character, you did an excellent job there.
In the end, I will definitely come back and read this again someday.
Thank you so much for sharing this piece with us :)

Try making it in to a story

Woahkay!
Well, at least Danny didn't lie about his secret or anything. It's better to be silent then to lie any day.
Hard out idea!
Yes, I always thought that Val's mother must have died also.
I enjoyed reading this. Good job! :D

Aw come on!, you can't just leave it like that at least make it a tow shots, a sequel or some ...don't leave it like that.

Wow, very unexpected ending, but great all the same.