Very good description of Edward's thoughts.
Judy

You don't have PMs so what happened to the rest of your stories? I like to reread fanfictions sometimes and I was hoping to reread this one and it's not here. Along with "Exposed". What happened?

Wonderful... can you please continue?

I wondered what you would do to give this the Savage twist we all know and love. It's the strangest thing, Sav. As a woman in my 60's I have held my fathers hand as he has faced the death of his wife (my mom, of course) 2 brothers, a sister, a son and a daughter within a 4 year time frame. He is the last of his generation, as I am the last of mine. So I'm really feeling Edward's agony, right? And then you throw that last line out and with a bit of a cringe I cannot help but laugh at myself for damn near jumping out of my seat.

yaaaaas

Nicely done! Thanks for writing!

Beautiful piece of work. You manage to make it feel as i your readers are in the room and
are being a part of what is happening. I love it when a writer drags you in so deep.
Just loved this story, except one little bit... it was way to short :)

Awesome, as always!

Work of a true master :) your writing is just so good !

oh sad. but good. that flu epidemic must have been horrific. you made it very real.

well penned!

So tragic. And so beautifull.

awesome!

This was Great! I love your writing! Thanks for sharing it!

Your writing creation of Edward brought detailed images of what the hospital would have been like than, how the illness felt up to the bite; simply loved this short story