MILO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Good story, but you should change the Description so it isnt spoiled that Nathan won from reading the description

This. Is. AMAZING!

Xaviers brother needs to go die... like now. :/

Not really, but I guess Xavier being tricked and all that just made it so much worse and for his brother to not even care...! :(

Haylee is so adorable. I love her to death! SHE SHALL BE BACK! Some day :)

Much love,

Em

NATHAN JUST WON THE HUNGER GAMES! :) Yeah, just wanted to stick it in there somewhere. Hahaha.

Awesome ending, awesome story! I followed it from the reapings to the last day and it all was excellent! I can't wait for the 101st Games!

perfect ending, thats all i can say

Wow, I loved seeing the list - it made me remember all the events and killings I'd forgotten!

Congrats to Nathan on winning. Though as he says, 'winning'...hmmm.

And well done for writing the whole thing! :D

:'(

D: MILO! NNNOOO! All he wanted was for his sister to have a good home and grow up right :'(

This chapter makes me INCREDIBLY SAD! But I'm happy for Nathan. We got to know Nathan over the course of the games and his relationship with Star was so sweet all the way to the bitter end... I hope we'll see more of him in the next Hunger Games!

WHICH! BTW: I will win ;)

I'll submit for that! Could you please save me a girl spot? I never get those... AND I WANT ONE!

Much love,

Em :)

this story was awesome! im just sad both of my tributes keeled over :'(

will you doing an other syot? if so, i want to submit!

Name (first and last):Elvorix Fox

Age (12-18, durr): 15

Looks: Down right sexy, She has dirty blonde hair and a perfect body. as she walks on stage every boys jaw drops at her beauty, she blinds people with her beauty only to fataly strike them. she has full lips and a sly smile rising one corner of her mouth in a smile. she has blue-green eyes and is 5 feet 6 iches making her the smallest career but the most deadly.

Personality: She is sly, elusive, cold-hearted, and most of all untrustful. she is clever and can find details easily to find even those tributes who are hard to catch, she is some what of a B*tch too all career tributes but that gains her more respect than hate.

Allies/Romance: Career tributes.

Skills: Setting traps, strategies to kill tributes, knows all major veins in the body so if shes close enough can kill you with one cut, she is fast and a high jumper, has forethought so she can figure out how to get in and out of traps.

Weapon of choice: Daggers, Expert Knife thrower (but can occasianlly miss). Maces.

Weaknesses: Close combat (ex: Hand-to-hand combat, swords fighting etc.) shes is a horrible climber, and under rates herself making her tired even though she may be ahead.

District: 2

Family: Khloee- mother Candimper- father

Reaction to the reaping/did they volunteer?: Volunteered

Other: shes the smartest of the careers making a strategiy to take down her victims as painfully as possible instead of taking promblems head on like most careers. she also dips her knifes in slow killing poisons to make her kills entertaining.

BloodBath: No, she kills most people at the blood bath

Can she be in the games? do you like her?

And here I was thinking you were going to be all unique and have a Career win! Ah well, little hypocrite me will shut up now. Anyway. Great job babe, you got close. RIP Sebby!

Not honestly my favorite Games ever, despite the fact that my slightly evil baby had a fabulous murder and was the last to die... I bet you will continue to refine your writing style and work on fluidity throughout your next story. Congrats on finishing! Weird as it sounds, I loved Sebby's death!

Oh. My. God. You're kidding me. Nate... won? Nate won! Wow, I have just got to be the happiest person alive right now! Thanks to all the people who voted for Nathan, it's really appreciated. And thanks to you, the writer, for making a really great story and a really happy person. I hope Nate will be remembered!

It's actually cool to have an inside look on the tributes once in a while. Keep up the good writing!