Wow... suspense is in the air

God this chapter gives me a bad feelings about upcoming events(I LOVE IT)

I'm sorry this review can't be longer but I just got back from my classes and I am so sleepy

Please update as soon as possible

This is soooooooo awesome! I love this idea overall. My fav part was whn Jake was having his inner monlogue when his friend got hurt. That was pretty intense... I can't wait for an update.! Poor Alice... I hope she makes it through.. Awesome story! Update soon!

ALICE? SHE'S GOING TO DIE? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

HaHa I'm really not that upset.

But I am kind of gross out that you mentioned that thing(starts with an R ends with an E)

Love you for the suspense

Please update as soon as possible

My gosh, what will they do now?

Well done (:

Update soon

You know I really don't appreciate your I'm-a-good-author-so-I-don't-bash-people-without-a-reason attitude of yours.

The reason to bash Bella is already there she's Bella! It's funny the only time I ever see Bella show believable emotion is when authors are either bashing her or making her suffer. For example in this chapter you could if you wanted to, I didn't, feel bad for Bella because of the raw emotion coming from her.

This was a good chapter and I can't wait to see more of the same.

Are you about to say "All hell broke loose". This fanf is really good. I love how not only Jake feel and effects of the imprint but so does Ed.

A very lovely and believeable background story I liked it.

Bella Bashing? I love it!

Just one thing though, in the chapters to come can you, how do I say this, make a point to say that the Wolf pack and the Cullens are supsicious of Jacob and Edward. Judging by the story what happened between Jacob, Edward, Bella took a while and what with the pack being telepathically linked and Jasper being an empath someone must have noticed a change in their behavior(besides Alice of course). I'm not saying that they should guess Jacob and Edward are together but the should at least feel that something isn't right.

Other than that I don't know what to say except keep up the good work. And also if you ever want to get a second or third opinion on something don't be afraid to send me a message

love it!

Hello it's me. I'm not sure if you remember me but I was one of your, many, reviewers for "One Door Close, a Window Opens"

I apologize that I didn't review when you first published this story but school has been stressing me out and it's only the first week.

Anyway I am enjoying this story so far(I like how you portray emotions). I really hope this story doesn't become a generic EdwardxJacob story in which the whole La Push wolf pack banishes Jacob for being with Edward and the Cullens take them in after that some more unnecessary drama happens and then the happily ever after. Don't get me wrong it's not that I don't like EdwardxJacob forbidden love stories it's just that after a while it seems like everyone is basically copying and pasting each others stories(meaning that there a no interesting twists that I can't already see coming).

I hope that you weren't trying to make Sam look bad in this chapter because I'm sorry to say but you did the opposite. Sam was absolutely right in his argument about Jacob's responsibilites as a pack member. And while a wolfs imprintee is important being their for your pack brothers should be just as important to Jacob.

I will admit I am a little weary but I faith that you will be one of the unique authors that doesn't have to follow the crowd(so to speak).

Can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as possible

love it keep writing

Well done :)

I can't wait for the next chapter