Awesome story. Loved it.
And ending made me laugh like a five year old playing with a cotton-sugar.

glad they seem to be ok

great story!

was all the thing about the rescue and arresting keller a dream then?

would he really kill neal? just can't imagine him doing that...

what do they want him to do? whoever they are...

Interesting story! All the time shifts get kind of confusing though.

Hahaha! I love it! I'm finally done, I can go read your new one now... This one was really good all the way through. I loved it. Last chapter was very emotional and awesome.

i just finished the story and loved it!

in this chapter i loved how they had a cake and all blew out the candles! it was cute! i kinda wanna draw that, if thats alright with you? :)

what did neal say that made peter cry?

That was sure a great movie with a very nice end to it.

JeanneZ84

Yay! A happy ending!

Great job!

-Rascal

Awww, this is a very sweet, enjoyable ending. Love Peter's "'And yes you are an ASS...et although I guess I could just call you... partner.'" Great work on this story. I look forward to more! :D

Very nice, strong story. Loved the idea of Neal getting the other agents in to back Peter. I also like the fact that you had realistic fallout from the trauma everyone had gone through. Peter and El needed time to themselves and everyone needed a chance to heal. The big part at June's was a nice ending, along with Mozzie's kung fu marathon.

Good job!

Amazing and awesome story!

good chapter but a little confusing