Great story, thanks for sharing x

I really love this story.

Good story

This is really distrubing. If she was older maybe but... Bella said he would tuck her into bed when she was younger. I don't understand how somone raising a child thru adulthood could be sexually attracted to that child even if she is of age. Just can't read any more.

I love this fanfiction

Omg I wanted alive and jasper to be together (happily) not like that but...I like how the story is going and I can't stop one minute without thinking about this fan fiction its great

Great story. It’s a shame about the writers block a little extension would have been excellent.

Still loved it though.

Throughly enjoyed the story... a sequel might be nice if writer's block lifts. Thanks for sharing a great story!

Couldn't stop reading it

Thank you for sharing your emotionally satisfying, sexy as hell story. Even though I had to do some hand shielding of my phone on the train to and from work, it was totally worth it. Great Edward!

Questions answered!

These will probably be answered as I read more, but I'm thinking of the timeline.

Esme & Carlisle adopted Bella when she was about 10 or 11. But, Bella met Alice at 16, when apparently Bella was new to the school (so Bella had moved 5 years or so after she was adopted?). I'm wondering how old Bella is now.

This is really good!

Read this one over the weekend. Loved the one-shot and I really liked this too. The ending was really abrupt, but you had the dreaded writer's block and I can understand why you stopped when you did. At least you did not abandon, for that, I appreciate this abrupt ending. When they had decided to move across country for her college and his job, I had wondered why Alice and Jasper didn't just follow them. Jasper could teach anywhere, why not follow the friends. So, when she didn't get into Northwestern and ended up at UC Berkeley instead, I was surprised that Jasper and Alice were heading to Texas instead. I loved that Edward got the job that he sought for. You did wrap it up nicely, I just wished for their wedding. A very simple one at that. To go off to a courthouse, with just Emmett and Alice standing up for Edward and Bella . . . Jasper and Rosalie in the room too. To marry and go to California and Dr. and Mrs. Cullen, in lieu of Miss Cullen. It would nip anything new in the rumor mill from happening there, in the bud. I never need children in a story, unlike most of everyone in the TwiFic universe. Thank you for sharing this with us. ~Christy

loved it. good drama that didn't last too long. nice.