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Truly enjoyed this from beginning to end. Each and every chapter. I esp. enjoyed how enamored they were with one another throughout their courtship through to their marriage. Thanks so much!

Love it! Matt is an ass and Daniel is sweet and amazing. Perfect :-)

I'm really enjoying the Detty moments, but as much as Matt was a jerk in early season 4, he would never cheat on Betty. She's his first love.
But I'm gonna continue reading. I love the Daniel/Betty dynamic you have going on. :)

WOW I can't believe I haven't read this story before, it is absolutely excellent.

cool hoe je het hebt geschreven :D!

I love the idea of them having a big family. The ending reminded me of how much joy Daniel had staying with Betty's family when they were decorating the Christmas tree he had bought for them. You could see he envied the closeness the Suarez family shared. Clearly, money doesn't buy and nothing can compare to a big, happy family at Christmas time! Great idea! Objectively, I would have to suggest some spelling and grammar edits and that having more conflicts might have made it seem more realistic. But, I love this direction. The series definitely left us fans craving at least a kiss!

I love the idea of them having a big family. The ending reminded me of how much joy Daniel had staying with Betty's family when they were decorating the Christmas tree he had bought for them. You could see he envied the closeness the Suarez family shared. Clearly, money doesn't buy and nothing can compare to a big, happy family at Christmas time! Great idea! Objectively, I would have to suggest some spelling and grammar edits and that having more conflicts might have made it seem more realistic. But, I love this direction. The series definitely left us fans craving at least a kiss!

Omg u have mad skills as a writer this would have been a awesome fifth season if the show has continued its a beautifully unique written story of betty n daniels love for each other u have a special gift don't let it go

Your story was very good and creative. The ending was very sweet. Have a wonderful week. )

Sorry! That I haven't reviewed in a while either. Crazy life too!

The wedding night! Wow!

Love the ending. Twins! That is so sweet! Daniel and Betty are going to be great parents.

great story

What a great chapter! So romantic and sweet! Please keep writing.

Great Chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the karaoke part..especially where he kissing her hand with the ring on it..when it came to that part of the song. It just made my heart want to melt.

great update

OMG What a wonderful way to propose! It was so sweet! Great that you also update today, good for you!)

Update soon please!