Well, its certainly very well written and you've portrayed Ichinose *I still laugh at the name* very well. You're a good writer There are a few errors though which you might want to correct.

POOR KAZUYA!

ya esta

Yeaaaah Go pandiita this is how episode 97 should go :3 but then ichinose should really tell aki how he fells 3

awwwwwwwwwwww.. soooo pooooor.. even that i didnt watch that ep yet but what you wrote is really a heart breaking.. i jus wish that can write like this (amazingly amazing story)

hooooooope you write more and more..

(oh yeah.. i didnt like aki and ichinose in the anime .. but this oneshot maked me loooooove them..

I'm sorry if my english isn't good but I'm spanish so,let's go:

It's incredible this history I love ichinose x aki and you

do it very very very good _

Could you do a secuel of the episode 99?

P.D.

Please do more like that fic (obiusly about ichinose and aki)you are very good with this couple.

YES! The very first Ichinose X Aki fanfic! I loved it!

ACK! Finally, someone writes a fic I actually can read and support and relate and - I'M SO HAPPY! You don't really see much of these fics! I'm so loving it!

"because all I told her were lies, all LIES LIES LIES!"

Lmao someone's been playing Blazblue.