Great story!

That was funny AND cute! Love the Jak and Keira-ness!

Really liked this! Really felt like they were all in character! Great job!

If I ever heard Samos say mackin in-game, I would never stop laughing.

Aw, LOVED THIS! :D

And happy birthday DarkEcoMuse!

~ Mika

Loved it. :D The "precautions" part just cracked me up so much. Keep it up!

...YOU! YOUUU! OHMYGOD. How did you know it was my birthday? xD

Haha, I don't really care how you know right now. You are amazing. :'D So prepare yourself for a reaaaally long review, just for you and praising your awesomeness.

ALRIGHT THIS STORY. JakxKeira. That's just what I needed. And I love how Samos is like 'uh, yeah, that's my DAUGHTER THERE.' and Jak responds with 'D8! I thought you were Daxter!' But it's an amazing heart-to-heart.

lmao, 'The Look.' eeek.

"Do you love her?"

"Um...um...what? D:"

YES. YES HE DOES. HE TOTALLY DOES. IT IS WRITTEN ALL OVER HIS FACE. AND EVEN UP-AND-DOWN HIS EARS. :DDDDDD

"Samos wouldn't want to hear about what he thought of her in skinny jeans." JAK! Seriously? XDDD

Urgh, JakxKeira yes yes. Haha, no more talking that night. None at all. ;D

YES! It has JakxKeira-ness, an angry and death-threat-giving Samos, and drunk!Daxter. You are just flippen awesome. :D

BEST. BIRTHDAY. GIFT. EVEEER.

YOU ARE AMAZING. I LOVE YOUUUUU, MY AWESOME FLYING GIANT DARK JAK BUDDY!

(And if I made any typos here I will never forgive myself. Dx)

And not log on? Dude, I practically live here, sorta. xD

I love you, thank youu!

Awww I love the JakxKeira romance! And there's nothing better than an embarrassed Jak and an over-protective Samos! :D

Also, happy (early) birthday to DarkEcoMuse!

I loved it! I had just the right balance of romance, humour and pulled heartstrings. Awesome work may short buddy!

Happy Birthday, Dark Eco Muse!