that was so beautiful and moving

First story of them already dating i've read! I liked it, and you did a very good job of keeping them in character while still making them behave in a new way. Keep writing!

If anyone DOESN'T know this song, they live under a rock. Nice choice, I must say. And U think Konota's voice could pull it off. Definitely a very cute and sweet story!

Cute, but you could do a rated-M part 2...

OH YEAH, BABY! Pure Konami goodness!

This story just reeks of sweet.

It's too mushy for my liking, but I say you did an excellent job.

Uwaah! This was so cute ;A; I think you got them pretty nicely in character too~

*raises hand, the one you're not currently attached to* I almost cried. What else is there it to say? That was B-E-A-UTIFUL~ Oh, and do you mind the fact that I completely ignored the song? It was interrupting all the yummy romance. Heh, sorry, I do that with almost all fics with songs in them. Too impatient.

Hmm, to make up for my lack of feedback or overall opinion, let's just say that I'm speechless, and that that somehow has an effect on my creative typing. Oh fuck it, you know how great the story was. It was super lovey-dovey and mushy and cute and pure awesome! It almost made me cry!

Decided to check this out after reading your other one shot. Very cute indeed. Moved along with enough dialogue and action but you didn't rush to the sex scene or feel the need to make it graphic and it works good the way it is. Good job.

Wow, that was cute but highly unusual for fanfiction. Usually it's more along the lines of first date, immediately followed by some dubcon or something...Kudos to you for writing it to be more realistic :D

This was painfully sweet. Nice job! It had such a great ending, I loved it! Nice work and I hope you write more!

Wow that's cute!

20/10 from me

that was awesome

To answer the categorization of song fics thing, they are actually against the rules. I remember seeing it while looking through them once. They most likely made it a rule to make sure a lawsuit doesn't come about due to the copyrights on the lyrics.

On another note, I did quite enjoy the story.

Wow...I'm shocked. This story actually made me forget for a brief moment that I don't like this pairing just so I could enjoy.

This really was a good story, it was well written, the pace went well for a one shot story, it managed to include sex without becoming a plotless rated M fiction, and it actually made Konata seem...likable. I thought that was impossible.

Great job! Keep writing stories!