This was absolutely beautiful. To the point, well written and genuine. It was true to the characters IMO. I can actually see something like this happening.

you have definitely made me ship this ship
aaahhhh so beautiful and broken; it's lovely

This was lovely. I could definitely see this happening. Alongside Sayu's progress, I like that you showed the development with Sachiko as well. Very well done.

...Wow. That was amazing.

Kudos to you.

:)

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Love...Love...Love!

-hell_grrl

you touched my heart with this writing...

thanks for this wonderful story! immediate fave!

Rather angsty yet tragic in a sense. Nicely done.

Beautiful. There are some angst cliche's here, but the stun from the sheer originality makes me respect this piece so much more. Kudos to you; you make even well-worn material polished to a shine.