Please finish

Ok

Man its so sad that this story just died when it was getting good.

Exceptional story, too bad it will never be finished...

Uhoh...

A friendly Inquisitor with both black templates and space wolves. And a magos fleet.

If there was more than one chapter still to come I'd say this was the turning point.

However all I can say now is that an alliance of every living thing against the Necrons now seems... Fun.
But not likely.

Well, that escalated quickly.

Necrons joining forces, kind of, with an Inquisitor to fight a guy having both Eldar and space marine... underlings?

Uh oh.

Also, the soldiers should know rl there are chaos marines as well...

Whahaha ha... I thought it would be Faust playing the emperor.
Well done twist!

I don't like that you sent more ships here.
The whole setup was a single ship, well them and Faust, sending a battle barge or even a real space marine battle ship after them uoends the setting quite a bit.
And makes for a less unique reading.

Other than that and some grammar and double word issues a very good chapter.

Come on man, finish this, it's just too good to let it end like this...

A very tzeentchian chapter... So much hope and ambition. :)

Another excellent chapter, even if at times a bit jumpy.

Gotta love Garibaldi, as usual. And can't wait for Talia to discover she's some kind of lich :p

A sad chapter in many ways. Your interpretation of the Vorlon seems to be on the more autistic side. Interesting take for a pure order race.

Kosh is a. Wee bit too "after death" Kosh here for my tastes.

Otherwise brilliant chapter, truly.

Very very nice chapter.

Especially the clashing mythogies. Loved it.

Well, I do hope our well loved gkar is not going to be too disappointed with the imperial xenophopics...

Overall a nice chapter. Love galut.