Poor bella

I love it a lot a lot a lot a lot and hope that there is sooooooooooo much more to come!

i like it so far

u have to finsh it! it's getting good!

i luv it

i really like this story setting and how edwards wasnt in there because that way when bella and jasper hook up they wont have to worry bout like edward or someone else finding them so please if you could write more

i love it please please update soon! :)

Like this story so far PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

well at least bella got to see that kate was alright before passing out. she actually got to tame the horse abit before it threw her. but she still found kate so that's good. hmmmm a half naked sweaty jasper, yummy... may i have some more please? -puppy dog eye look-

Just found this story. and i am loving it. please update soon.

hay ope you update soon cant wait to read more

Its a greaat story keep it going

maybe you should have jasper to be at bella's side when she wakes up. maybe she will be knocked out for a few days so he wouldn't have slept. just a thought

Great chapter. Keep up the awesome work.

You should of had Jasper find Kate and had him bring her back to the house to find Bella missing and they go search for ehr and then takes her to see a doctor and when she wakes up they meet and spark happen :-P thats just my opinion, in this case, you should have Jasper stop by to see her and make sure shes ok since he kinda came to the rescue and let the sparks fly that way :-)