I've enjoyed this. I can't wait to find out who River Song is in this story!

Wow! The closing of the Pandorica was so much more dramatic with Lily's distress and her interaction with the Doctor. Really good.

I liked the relayed letter and the Doctor's response.

This sounds like a great original adventure! Not only Jenny's return, but the Family after her. Really excited to see what happens.

So glad the doctor and Lilly were finally reunited! I really like your stories, but the separation chapters started to get really boring especially since they were basically just rewrites of the actual episodes with Lilly's name thrown in to a couple lines of dialogue.

Cool! Never thought of that! I love it! Excellent chapter!

Ah! Now he's getting worried about his mate. And of course it's Lily! I look forward to the next chapter!

Are you kidding? I love the inclusion of Stargate! Please, continue!

(stares at the computer screen for a good five minutes in shock)

...Jack O'Neill. Pegasus Galaxy. Wraith. Sam. Not to mention Jenny's back.

YOU ARE AMAZING! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

Oh, the idiot! Lily's going to be MAD at him when she finds out! She loves you, Doctor, and she can protect herself! Go and get her!

Aha! I wonder what else-Donna's wedding! The maid of honor was Lily! I look forward to more chapters!

*raises hand* I have a mini angel statue in my room, and it freaks me out whenever I see the weeping angels.

You did an awesome job with this story. I can't wait to finish it and start the next one. Anyway...
NO! I MOST CERTIANTLY NOT HAPPY THAT YOU KILLED RORY! Rory! NOOOOOOOO! *starts sobbing uncontrollably*

I want lily!

Love like always