Haunting.

This story is beyond amazing to the point where I almost don't know what to say (well, almost)! It is so deep and so realistic, so full of raw fear and diminished hope. I have never read anything, whether it be a novel or fanfic, remotely like this- it's so unbelievebly and unimaginably fantastic. A tale of beautiful darkness. It flows with such an understanding it almost seems like a poem. Wonderfuly splendid job of writing about

death among the fairest. It seriuosly sounds like something Tolkien himself would write! Keep it up!

I still have no words. This is too... filling a story. It leaves no space in my heart for speculation.

Good story, one of the best in Fanfiction.

Oh, ...
There are no words.

Scary. Very well written- although English not being your first language does jump out and bite you from time to time, most notably in your using "or" where "of" should be, and referring to "the Shire" as just "Shire".
I liked it, mostly. It made me feel almost sick, but I had to finish it. Just a few things bugged me- the fight between the Balrog and Ungoliant seemed pretty much pointless. And killing Aragorn with the dragon doesn't match the book, which I know doesn't make it wrong just AU, but it seems like a useless AU: why change the book unless it's needed for the plot?
Anyway, overall, a good job. Just frightening and depressing, as all stories of the End of Days are.
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this is so good!

I was crying at the end of this. I bow before your artistry with words. There are a few grammer problems, but as you said in your profile, English is not your first language. A very good fic, in the true spirit of Lord of the Rings.

Oh, Lady Bright! Cam, this is so sad and good and wonderful and ... words fail me. You are an awesome writer; I salute your genius.

Beautiful. Remarkable. Well researched and deeply affecting.

A beautifully crafted piece of work about Dagor Dagorath. I like it, as I like all your other, less serious works. Nice.

"The Silmarillion" is the name of a set of stories, not the plural of "a silmaril". You want the plural of "silmaril", you just put an "s" on the end.

Wow . . .

That was . . . amazing. Thank you.

hS

Hey. I haven't finished this, but I've just discovered something beyond belief: A genuine Miss Cam-created Mini Balrog. Look:

'You told me of the Silmarillions and Earendel when we rested in Fangorn.'

I'd swear that used to be 'Earendil'. Or is it actually a Gimli-created Mini?

hS

This is exactly the kind of story that I love. Friendship, Despair, Hope, and Sacrifice. I don't think that I have ever read anything more perfectly suited to my tastes. Dagor Dagorath and the Elves sacrificing themselves...Why have I not read this before? I love it. The ending...there aren't any words to describe it, except for the ones that you have already used. And the abstract quality. Wow.