I enjoyed this so much! It was hilarious to read about John realizing what mind games the Holmes family play with each other and his mind going "why am I even here". I loved how you wrote all the characters, and Holly was such a nice touch, too.

And John and Sherlock's dynamic? Impeccably written, truly, you capture all the details and aspects of their relationship perfectly. I started reading this to pass the time but soon found myself imagining everything play out in front of my eyes, as if watching an episode, and occasionally laughing, too. What a wholesome reading experience.

Awwww this was beautifully written, capturing the enigma that is Sherlock quite well. You had me smiling throughout! Good job.

great! absolutely fantastic loved it

NOOOO WHY DID THIS HAVE TO END PLEASE CONTINUE IT I CANT THIS HAS TO BE ITS OWN SEPARATE BOOK

This is a fantastic story. I love how you've captured the subtle aspects of how the Holmes family does (and might) interact while retaining the fluffiness that is a Christmas story. It felt natural the way John and Sherlock came to discovering and navigating their feelings for each other. It was beautiful to read the extra depth into their interactions and imagine how their adventures would continue with another dimension added to their partnership.

Thank you for sharing this with the world :)

cute story. although the references to Sherlock being perfect sort of made him wicked insufferable

I hate her. I don't know why but this chapter incited an intense feeling of dislike for mummy Holmes.

WOW! This was an awesome story! At first i thought it was going to be one of those short, crack fics that don't really have an interesting plot and are just written for the sake of it, but i have to say i didn't expect this:) I found it really funny at the beginning and then things got interesting but all having a light tone..Furthermore, Sherlock and Johns relationship was really sweet!
Very nice job!

I loved it! Every piece of it. Oh Gods, you stayed truly in character of them, i didnt like Aracelia that much but I thing I get it. Anthea, or Holly in this case was amazing. I just. I died, so beautifu having Sherlock planning a date, a very Sherlock kind of date but date nonethelessz thank you for your amazing story

I read "malfoy manor" and i scrolled past everything to leave this review, just to tell you that ten lines in the story and I already love the idea. Yessss everythinf thats has HP has a ten! Well ill

So very cute!

Should b rated M!

Please increase rating to M.

Woow
I like it !
It's pretty fun .
I just like it sooo much!

The second I read "peacocks" I thought of Malloy Manor, and I laughed so hard when you wrote that in two lines down