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Very good. I searched right away for a cute Link and Ruto fic after clearing Jabu Jabu for the first time, and this was the perfect one. Needless to say, reading this made me smile.

Aww That was so cute!

I like how you got Link's essence without ever having him speak. I can never get it right in my attempts,

Nice Story :)

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Nice fanfic there. I actually love the LinkxRuto couple. Would of been nice if the model was magical and the two could explore the world. Sort of an idea for a sequel to this fanfic or something.

Hmm, I wish my life could be simple like that again. I didn't even realise I missed being a child so much until I read this, things were so simple then. Atleast I can revisit my child-hood in literature, with fics such as this.

I was half expecting this to be a sad excuse for writing but you have proven otherwise with well done sentences and amazing word flow. I was reeled in the very first paragraph, your style seems to act as lure of a sort. Thank you for the short story, I very much so enjoyed it.

The Sage of Water,

~ConGie

P.S. And not to sound like a complete ass but her eyes are actually purple.