Best reaslistic fanfic among the fanfics I've read so far. I am actually tempted to swap the real endings with this one in my mind. You preserved their actual characters quite accurately and created a wonderful story. Very very good luck for your writing career.

the story is written beautifully, a masterpiece. but damn, Sasuke is such an asshole (hot and sexy) in every chapter. it has to take another death (/almost) of his beloved before he comes to a conclusion.

I just finished Chapter 10 and wow Sasuke, what a fucking asshole!

I love how the way you write! But Sasuke is not that mean

SASUKE ISNT THAT MEAN!

The plot is neatly done, and I really liked this fic!
As per advice, I believe that you should describe a little more to add a more visual tone to your fic. Also, there's a lot of dialogue, which is good! It helps capture characters well. There's a bit of cheese to this fic—which isn't necessarily bad, either.
Also, you could use a thesaurus—using the same word, like smile, makes the story slightly monotone.
But with these few pointers, your writing will be perfection!

Well written. Little bit OOC but tolerable. A jealous Sasuke is very hard to pull out. Sakura’s impulsiveness is a bit OOC considering that she’s one of the brightest and known to fight using her brains (marrying Sasuke without thinking).

I like the story. Cute.
But i find some writing mistakes.

I just on the brink of job is all I can dammit I'm crying again.

I'm crying... because your such a good writer I'm cryi g is this possible I'm crying over cartoon that's are really good at writing and I love the itachis alright an I right.

I have so many mied feeling! First, GREAT STORY! SASUKE IS AN ASSHOLE! SAKURA IS TRULLY A SAINT! AND FUCK YOU SASUKE GAARA IS MY NEW HUSBAND! STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH!

Damn right Sakura you tell him! Sasuke! That fucking asshole!

This truly was a lovely story. It even made me cry towards the end. Thank you for writing this.

I love it,,, finally i'm done reading the entire chapters after such a long hours of reading... It was really great, funny, full of humor and entertaining... I have to be honest that i'd skipped the tragic parts bcoz I can't handle the verge of tears,,, gezzzz... but I have to commend u bcoz I really do love SS authors who still keep Sasuke's character on track,,,, remember how deep he is in terms of everything... thank u for making this... I'm still hoping I could still read tons of these... And yeah, the story itself that always reminds SS shippers of sakura's unwavering love for sasuke... that's really incomparable and priceless... #Thumb'sUp! #Cheers n #Long live #SS #writers!

Omg. This is very well written! I love it! 3

the best story I ha