This chapter was too weird... and I think now i'm lost.

This has been your most interesting "episode" by far. Love it.

I like tho whole ascended empire mythos you are building, though I'm a bit disappointed in McKay

Please tell me this awesome story is going to continue! There is going to be an Episode 4 right?

no, i think that liona is more likely to get together with daniel... assuming it happens, their 'get-togather' would be the push that would make ryan turn daniel into alterra, at least it's what i feel in my gut what would happen, i haven't really thought about this, it's just a guess based on daniel's personality and ryan's desire to have full alterra younglings :P (he has to have 1)

lol everything i wrote is most likely bullshit(i'm sleepy)... well cheers!

ps - i got to say - whatever happens daniel will notice that liona won't be very ori-follower-like ...cheers again! :)

i was trying to review the next chapter again but i couldnt nway on point of romantic intrest do u think the girl would end up with ryan i mean liona/morgan

Well, i've spent all weekend reading all your story's on the return of the ancients since im sick with the flu. (i hate that flu). I have finally caught up with the story line and i must say im loving the story's! In-fact i can't get enough.

I hope you create as many more episodes as i can read, but thats just wishful thinking on my part. If i have any constructive criticizes to give its just one thing, something thats been bothering me throughout the series; lack of detail. By lack of detail i mean when you describe a room, or a ship you talk about control chairs in the ancient war ships, but you never really go beyond that, such as the color of the room, size. I found with Bra'tacs new warships the lack of detail made it hard to in-vision; how was the bridge set up, the color of the walls, was the ancient control systems like we seen in sg1 made of stone or like Atlantis were the lantiens had crystal tech?

Please keep up the hard work because im loving every moment of it.

There isn't gonna be a next episode people. Aer-ki posted on gate world that he doesn't have time to write any more. If the story comes back it will most likely be a year or more.

cant wait 4 the next episode

I'm really gonna miss this story. It gripped me and I couldn't escape it. I hope it comes back some day as it has a great fan base. Good luck to you aer-ki. Hoep to hear from you again (in story form).

lol the ori sure was a funny guy

and poor morgan

Arggh am going crazy for the next episode, im so addicted to this fanfic i wish it could be brought to life even more by doing it on telly...where is someone filthy rich when you need them huh? lol

Cant wait for the next chapter and to see how things are panning out for ryan now that the battle over pegasus is somewhat over, also cant wait to hear more from sam!

Please update soon

Good updates and funny end to this chapter.

nice episode

please continue soon!

The Ori is kind of smug, but I guess having the kind of power that he has would probably make him understandably so. I thought it was pretty funny making Ryan say "hallowed are the Ori" for saving him though.

Introducing Morgan La Fey into the story is an interesting development. I like that it raises the possibility for more ascended beings to want to go against the Ascended Empire.