Reviews for Dungeon Crawling in Chicago
Nobody Smurf chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
I have to wonder if you are actually rolling these fights. If so, kudos.
I like Lyn. I hope she survives.
Work for? He's probably a mafia boss. Or retired rather than 'retired'.
...and the knowledge and experience to game the system.
Self assessment is the core difference between a decent person and a Xianxia protagonist.
The trick to protecting innocent bystanders is to use their own leader as a meat shield.
Bush Sr wasn't great, but he wasn't a bad president, which is more than I can say for any since.
Nice loot, but the giant robot is the best. XD
He dodged...Magic Missle...and hurt an Autobot? O_o
By rights Blaze, /should/ benefit from that.
Huh. Is Lyn related to George?
ICW? Oh, joy. Bumblemore is /not/ going to like that meeting. Or he is going to enjoy it far too much. Never can tell with him.
vmage2 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
This story is so much effing awesome. You rock.
Hawkebat chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
If i hadn't had to work i would have finished this in one sitting. The pace was fast and only slowed a bit when he counted his loot. Just what was his final level before leaving Chicago cause i lost track at five. This just goes to show you never summon a person that has more knowledge in DND than most players and a power player to boot. Can we say Demi-immortal. Very good read and one of the best i have come across on here.
Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
roles - rolls

-Kinda embarrassing for a pen and paper geek to misspell this :-)

Magnificience - Magnificence

gun's - guns

respond in - respond with
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
should be axe not ax

That was an addicting - That was addicting

If I let you out while you start - If I let you out, will you start

shear amount - sheer amount
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
as I the Inertial Armor - as the Inertial Armor
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Personally I think using rape to show how evil some villains are, is in poor taste and gratuitous, not to mention unpleasant to read.
Really lowered my enjoyment of this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
marital arts? I think you mean 'martial' :-)

drunk? Should be 'drink'

as survey? Should be 'a survey'

Mechanics-wise, I do not believe that you are, or should be allowed to reduce level adjustments immediately, nor to choose a template beyond level 1.
I can't remember exactly how it functions, but I believe you need to wait 3 levels for each 1 adjustment.
reddir chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
A great story. A lot more gritty and serious than what I normally read but you did it nicely, not dwelling too long on any horrible topic.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
Haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw it wes good haw haw haw haw
jfcwtfusernames chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
Wow. Just wow.
Shido-Ore-Sama chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
This was thoroughly enjoyable, but might I suggest smaller chapters. My friend and I try to stick to 6k, though I like my first chapter to have 10k.
Crys chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
Wild ride. More than slightly on the fantastical side, but fun read as long as I'm not trying to apply any form of reality.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
This was by for the Best gamer Self-inserts i have reed to date Good job
RHJunior chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Bravissimo! Encore!
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