| Reviews for Dungeon Crawling in Chicago |
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Nobody Smurf chapter 1 . 10/22/2018 I have to wonder if you are actually rolling these fights. If so, kudos. I like Lyn. I hope she survives. Work for? He's probably a mafia boss. Or retired rather than 'retired'. ...and the knowledge and experience to game the system. Self assessment is the core difference between a decent person and a Xianxia protagonist. The trick to protecting innocent bystanders is to use their own leader as a meat shield. Bush Sr wasn't great, but he wasn't a bad president, which is more than I can say for any since. Nice loot, but the giant robot is the best. XD He dodged...Magic Missle...and hurt an Autobot? O_o By rights Blaze, /should/ benefit from that. Huh. Is Lyn related to George? ICW? Oh, joy. Bumblemore is /not/ going to like that meeting. Or he is going to enjoy it far too much. Never can tell with him. |
vmage2 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 This story is so much effing awesome. You rock. |
Hawkebat chapter 1 . 3/29/2018 If i hadn't had to work i would have finished this in one sitting. The pace was fast and only slowed a bit when he counted his loot. Just what was his final level before leaving Chicago cause i lost track at five. This just goes to show you never summon a person that has more knowledge in DND than most players and a power player to boot. Can we say Demi-immortal. Very good read and one of the best i have come across on here. Great job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 roles - rolls -Kinda embarrassing for a pen and paper geek to misspell this :-) Magnificience - Magnificence gun's - guns respond in - respond with |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 should be axe not ax That was an addicting - That was addicting If I let you out while you start - If I let you out, will you start shear amount - sheer amount |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 as I the Inertial Armor - as the Inertial Armor |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 Personally I think using rape to show how evil some villains are, is in poor taste and gratuitous, not to mention unpleasant to read. Really lowered my enjoyment of this story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 marital arts? I think you mean 'martial' :-) drunk? Should be 'drink' as survey? Should be 'a survey' Mechanics-wise, I do not believe that you are, or should be allowed to reduce level adjustments immediately, nor to choose a template beyond level 1. I can't remember exactly how it functions, but I believe you need to wait 3 levels for each 1 adjustment. |
reddir chapter 1 . 2/17/2017 A great story. A lot more gritty and serious than what I normally read but you did it nicely, not dwelling too long on any horrible topic. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw haw it wes good haw haw haw haw |
jfcwtfusernames chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 Wow. Just wow. |
Shido-Ore-Sama chapter 1 . 10/6/2016 This was thoroughly enjoyable, but might I suggest smaller chapters. My friend and I try to stick to 6k, though I like my first chapter to have 10k. |
Crys chapter 1 . 7/28/2016 Wild ride. More than slightly on the fantastical side, but fun read as long as I'm not trying to apply any form of reality. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 This was by for the Best gamer Self-inserts i have reed to date Good job |
RHJunior chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 Bravissimo! Encore! |