| Reviews for Payback |
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   levysbookshelf chapter 9 . 3/21/2015 This was awesome and creative! I like how the dreams changed. |
| Alta-Lemur chapter 9 . 9/18/2014 Interesting. I enjoyed reading. |
| Lyneel chapter 9 . 7/11/2012 beautiful. what an intriguing idea. I wish that the story was longer, as I'm not entirely satisfied and it was a rather sudden ending, but it still made the fic feel complete, so it's allright. I like the plot and your writing style, and especially sides of the characters you reveal so convincingly. It was great to see |
| gogosai chapter 1 . 5/21/2012 wow！！I really like your fic！especially the way Kurogane treat FaiCan I Translate this fic into Chinese？ of course you will be named as the author and when I finish it I'll send you a link |
| R Unworldly chapter 9 . 12/13/2011 I LOVED this story. You did such a good job. |
| Moonphase chapter 2 . 8/8/2011 whoa! tat's one hell of a revenge Fai! |
| Billie the fourth sage chapter 9 . 4/30/2011 This was beautiful. And I tell you, I don't fave often ;) This was so well done, so different, so gorgeous and striking and painful and beautiful. Great last chapter, too. |
| TheGoth24 chapter 9 . 3/9/2011 I absolutely loved it from beginning to end, I hope you make more! |
| Larkawolfgirl chapter 9 . 1/15/2011 That was an interesting way to end it. I guess its up to us to decide what will become of them. Was an intriguing story, plus I love your writing style. |
| Mashiara91 chapter 7 . 11/21/2010 I'm reviewing this chapter only because the stupid system wont let me review the last one again... and my question is: ...it's over? :S! you can't end it with that! please i want more...how about an epilogue, it can even be post series if you like. how 'bout it? |
| Lithium Amaranth chapter 9 . 11/1/2010 this was awsome! i almost couldn't finish the last chapter i just got so embarrassed for Kurogane lol great work. really loved it |
| MisFox chapter 9 . 10/27/2010 it was really good! :3 Wow... just.. wow! (thats a good wow too lol) i love your writing style! and this story! :D |
| AllTheLosers chapter 9 . 10/27/2010 ._. That was an interesting ending... Like, it was good, but quick and slightly confusing... |
| Chen-chan chapter 9 . 10/26/2010 Awww...its over...but the ending was so cute and sweet. Thank you for writing this. would you perhaps consider writing a sequel to this? Either way I really enjoyed it. |
| sammycrusinix chapter 9 . 10/26/2010 OMG! Please tell me this isn't the last chapter! This one was so deep! It almost made me cry! |
