Wow! You really nailed McCoy on the head. Awesome stuff.

Very good.

Terrific! You came up with a great idea for a story and wrote it very well. All the characters were spot-on, we got a look at McCoy's past, and *I* certainly enjoyed the focus on the doctor. Thanks!

nice story

Too cute! ;)

AWESOME little plot filler- gods I love FanFiction!

Aww, that was sweet. I'd never considered something like that... then again, I wasn't too impressed with third season, so I didn't give it the attention it really deserved. I shall have to remedy this soon...

You really deserve far more reviews and comments on this stuff. Your writing is great, you really seem to get the characters, and you manage to get us into their heads without going overboard on the description or making it tedious. I hope to see your stuff published one day, and I kind of wish that these had made it into the original episodes. Adventure is fun and all, but sometimes it's nice to just sit back and watch something normal and mundane, and remember that no matter how many hundreds of years it's been, they're still human and always will be.

So, yeah. Great stuff, and I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for more. I'm just sad that none of your other stuff is in fandoms I'm familiar with, or I'd devour it just as earnestly.

In that vein, might I be so bold as to point you towards the original Sherlock Holmes novels...? There seems to be quite a bit of crossover between the Star Trek (especially TOS) and Sherlock Holmes fandoms, and I think you'd do it great justice.

Loved this! You touched a subject-and perspective on McCoy-that few do; I could totally count this conversation between them as fact. :) Loved your McCoy, really loved him and all those little personality details!

Excellent! You got the characterization just right and your writing was clear and concise yet not cold. Enjoyed this very much. I felt that it quite easily could have been in the actual episode

Thank you for this insight into my fav. Dr McCoy! I really appreciate your effort.

Thought this was great, well-written, good characterization, and you very cleverly tied in details from the 2 shows. Loved the dialogue - look forward to reading more of your stuff :-)

I really liked this - it was fun and cute and very McCoy.

I really liked this story.

It's always interesting to see a different facet of McCoy.

I always thought McCoy was the one that was most underestimated. Not just medically, it's not as if anybody believes his "country doctor" spiel

Very interesting. Bones is very good at fooling people into thinking he's not a threat. Personally, I think he's more dangerous than both Spock and Jim in a lot of ways. Poor Bones, no one gives him his dues. I like this a lot. Please write more soon.